Too british. I mean, come on, fluff??? Jeez, it'll never sell in middle america.
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Apolyton opening sentence contest (revisited)
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Sadly, he never saw it coming."Mal nommer les choses, c'est accroître le malheur du monde" - Camus (thanks Davout)
"I thought you must be dead ..." he said simply. "So did I for a while," said Ford, "and then I decided I was a lemon for a couple of weeks. A kept myself amused all that time jumping in and out of a gin and tonic."
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I was skimnming the entries and noting the frequent use of commas. Hard to get a complex thought into one sentence without writing a complex sentence. Here Kaak settles for one slightly modified thought expressed in only six words and yet he insists on putting a comma in there.Originally posted by Kaak
Sadly, he never saw it coming.
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7/10. You got me intriguedOriginally posted by Boris Godunov
You should at least spell "punctuation" correctly when criticizing people over it.
"I have been reading up on the universe and have come to the conclusion that the universe is a good thing." -- Dissident
"I never had the need to have a boner." -- Dissident
"I have never cut off my penis when I was upset over a girl." -- Dis
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Bah, you oaf, mine was an entry.Originally posted by Boris Godunov
Are you purposefully trying to be humorless, or did you just not get it?(\__/) 07/07/1937 - Never forget
(='.'=) "Claims demand evidence; extraordinary claims demand extraordinary evidence." -- Carl Sagan
(")_(") "Starting the fire from within."
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Unfair, I say, unfair!Originally posted by Boris Godunov
Suuuure it was--but note mine got an 8/10.
(\__/) 07/07/1937 - Never forget
(='.'=) "Claims demand evidence; extraordinary claims demand extraordinary evidence." -- Carl Sagan
(")_(") "Starting the fire from within."
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