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Punctuation in the penultimate sentence is very awkward, imo. Better to start new sentence after 'India and Pakistan', as having all those commas after the colon is a little confusing and just sounds wrong.
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Last edited by Verres; October 22, 2003, 13:47.Desperados of the world, unite. You have nothing to lose but your dignity.......
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That's always the hardest part, writing a concise introduction to effectively present your thesis.
Much harder than writing the body of the essay.Scouse Git (2) La Fayette Adam Smith Solomwi and Loinburger will not be forgotten.
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Personally, introductions have never presented much of a problem. It's the actual essay I tend to have difficulty with...run out of steam after the first few paragraphs (precisely what is happening at the minute
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Same here. I'm writing an essay on the history of UN peacekeeping and I've hit a block, not helped by the fact that I don't really have the right books to enable me to write it."Paul Hanson, you should give Gibraltar back to the Spanish" - Paiktis, dramatically over-estimating my influence in diplomatic circles.
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This is not a problem when you aren't required to cite sources.
Heck, in my last sociology work (23 pages explaining that computer-nerds aren't like the general population), I knew from the beginning what I wanted to say. The biggest problem was to find books to make it look scientific
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It certainly doesn't help.Originally posted by Azazel
another problem is you not knowing jack **** about it, isn't it?
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Originally posted by Urban Ranger
Watch the tenses.Watch them, watch them!While the United States and Europe are waging the war against terror, everybody forgot about the conflict between India and Pakistan, one thatcIV list: cheats
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Dodgy? Where?Originally posted by MikeH
UR... some of that is still a bit dodgy... sorry.
Besides, I put it together in 5 minutes, so I wasn't expecting much.
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