boredom + english class = random crap

[Kuciwalker]

... and skywalker = not quite awake, so forgive me if this post seems random or incoherent

Today in english class we had a 10 minute writing thingamajigger where we were supposed to pick some moment when we had a crush on someone and describe that moment. We weren't turning it in or sharing it or anything, it was just an exercise (a prelude to the homework) but I didn't feel like doing it and started writing something sarcastic about the assignment. It ended up as something really weird:

not gonna happen
thoughts are for heads
not for inanimate pieces of paper
MY thoughts
not yours
you can't have them
not one
else
how will I keep any?
one might slip out with the other
onto the paper
where anyone can take it
and each time a thought comes out
surely another will slip through
before the pen leaves the paper
and another
and another
until they ALL are gone
and then where will I be?
thoughtless
you call ME
to keep my thoughts to myself
and yet
you let yours
slip away

[Ben Kenobi]

Post this in the already existing poetry thread, Skywalker.

[Al B. Sure!]

shut the hell up

[Asher]

You juss jealous cuz skywalker makes made rhymes yo, bettah than 2pac

[Al B. Sure!]

that wasn't directed towards you, my Canadian friend

[Al B. Sure!]

speaking of rap, Asher likes it doggystyle

[Ben Kenobi]

I've heard worse, Albert.

[Asher]

Originally posted by Albert Speer
speaking of rap, Asher likes it doggystyle

I thought you weren't going to tell everyone.

Keep it up and I'll mention the extension you had to use.

[Lorizael]

Neat piece, Sky.

Do you see the irony in showing us this...

[Kuciwalker]

what irony

[Al B. Sure!]

this thread is like a car crash...

not gonna happen
thoughts are for heads
not for inanimate pieces of paper
MY thoughts
not yours
you can't have them
not one
else
how will I keep any?
one might slip out with the other
onto the paper
where anyone can take it
and each time a thought comes out
surely another will slip through
before the pen leaves the paper
and another
and another
until they ALL are gone
and then where will I be?
thoughtless
you call ME
to keep my thoughts to myself
and yet
you let yours
slip away

my god! words do not exist in the english language to describe my feelings for this. the best representation of my feelings i could possibly come up for this would be to smack skywalker in the back of his head. my god...

[Lorizael]

Originally posted by Albert Speer
this thread is like a car crash...



my god! words do not exist in the english language to describe my feelings for this. the best representation of my feelings i could possibly come up for this would be to smack skywalker in the back of his head. my god...

Why exactly are you here?

[Asher]

People can't help but gawk at car wrecks.

[Kuciwalker]

my god! words do not exist in the english language to describe my feelings for this. the best representation of my feelings i could possibly come up for this would be to smack skywalker in the back of his head. my god...

you're welcome

[Al B. Sure!]

why am i here? my pop forgot to pull out when he was nutting... or did you mean something else?