Quick change:
"Also, as you are taking the unit risk - feel free to keep the gold proceeds - it was a nice offer - but its only fair if you keep the gold."
is maybe too long. How about...
"Also, as you are taking the unit risk - its only fair if you keep the gold."
"Also, as you are taking the unit risk - feel free to keep the gold proceeds - it was a nice offer - but its only fair if you keep the gold."
is maybe too long. How about...
"Also, as you are taking the unit risk - its only fair if you keep the gold."
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