Mikes story

[vovan]

Look, now, Chrisius, I don't know about Scratchy, but I can tell you this: I don't need to buy no msitakes* from you, I can make some of my own - juicy homebred ones. Maybe you make yours from concentrate, or keep them in the fridge for months. How do I know? Now, if I use my own, I always know they are fresh and succulent - the readers will like 'em

Therefore, you need to compile a list of which mistakes you got for sale, so that the authors could either credit you, or come up with their own!

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* msitake - © ChrisiusMaximus.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Well its been some time since I wrote this piece and I just wanted to remind you all about it

Of course also for anyone who may not have seen this first time round.

Ive been wondering whether to do a sequel, what do you think folks.

[Nym]

Originally posted by ChrisiusMaximus
Well its been some time since I wrote this piece and I just wanted to remind you all about it

Of course also for anyone who may not have seen this first time round.

Ive been wondering whether to do a sequel, what do you think folks.

I vote for a sequel.

[vovan]

* Vovan hears the crowd outside his window chant: "Sequel! Sequel!! Sequel!!!" *

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Thank you so much but there will have to be far more pleading from the masses

I would like to do a sequel but Id also like to see some life return to this forum

[unscratchedfoot]

I would kill each and everyone of you on the spot to be able to read a sequel from the master.

vova-casanova, what does your signature mean? What is "C"? Do you mean that you are imagining Chrisius running around all covered in olive oil?

[vovan]

Originally posted by unscratchedfoot vova-casanova, what does your signature mean? What is "C"? Do you mean that you are imagining Chrisius running around all covered in olive oil?

Nope. C is a programming language and supposedly it is really easy to screw everything up with it. That statement in my sig is actually what our professor said back when I was taking a class about C.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Now now Scratchy just calm down there's no need to murder everybody just to get me to write you know

Anyway Ive still got Fight for Freedom on the go and then I already have my third story worked out in my head, so mike will have to wait a while longer yet

[vovan]

Originally posted by ChrisiusMaximus
Now now Scratchy just calm down there's no need to murder everybody just to get me to write you know

Is it safe to come out then?



* Vovan crawls from under the couch, looking around wearily, watching out for scratch to jump out from behind a corner and go on a bloody rampage or put olive oil all over Chrisius *

[Kaos XIII]

Your first story, hmm. I just started reading it and I’m up to where the Russians captured Leeds, GRRRR.

It’s funny reading everyone’s year old post.

I’m glad Fight for Freedom is rolling along. I’ll catch up with that one later.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

I was'nt sure if some newer posters here had seen this when I bumped it up so I hope you enjoy it Kaos, it was good fun to write and the feedback was superb and hilarious at times.

Be nice to see you do another piece

[vovan]

Well, I reread the whole thread from the beginning, inspired by Kaos' statement that "It’s funny reading everyone’s year old post" and indeed it's pretty interesting to read stuff I already forgot I wrote or read. Man, I was pretty harsh with the first couple of posts, eh? Any ways, now that I've reread everything, I'd like to reiterate something I said in my very first post in this thread:

There are three kinds of stories I found here. I separate them based on what I am thinking after I have read them:

1. Nah, this is too boring to read.
2. Wow, this is really good!
3. Hey, this is cool, why don't I write something also.

Now, your story fits into the third category.

(Sorry about quoting myself. I am normally not like that ) This thing still inspires me to write something. In fact, I am so inspired now that if it wasn't 2 o'clock in the morning, and if I didn't have an economics test at 8 and a physics test at 9 o'clock tomorrow morning (well, I guess I should say: today), I'd sit down and write something right now.

Oh, and one more thing, this amount of feedback makes me too jealous. Maybe I should bump postmortem.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

BUMP

[Paddy]

oh look.... not game to print this one... wow a book....

so when does the sequel start???

or have I missed something here...

edit: just copied it to word, and with out cleaning out the sig lines etc, as a raw copy it is 65 pages... very impressive

[Paddy]

this was great, and still no word on a sequel