Originally posted by C0ckney
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threeohthree... what's with the really brief melody that is scattered throughout? Why did you cut that so short after a few notes? Felt like a tease.
As Novas Aventuras (Acid mix) was much better. The change up at 1:20 I didn't really like though. Was a little off-putting. Too busy for my tastes at 4 minutes in. Maybe that's par for the course in this type of music, though, but the first 2 minutes were good. Very good. And I much preferred that. That's rappable, baby

Moog Dub... no. no.
It sounded like a perpetual intro. After two minutes of it, I saw it was 7 minutes long so skipped ahead checking it at different intervals but always had this teasing to it where I'm like okay... let the beat drop... okay... any second now, it's going to explode into something... never did. There was a tease at 1:18 but it went nowhere.Sucrilho... take out that thing or change the sample... I don't know what it is. It stopped briefly at 52 seconds and again at 1:35 but then you put it back in, in a slightly fuller form the second time through. it's a regular rhythm that sounds like a cd skip. It is distracting and sounds really bad. The rest of the track sounds like too much experimentation. A few notes of the little honkey-tonk sounds a little more than 2 minutes in then the random strings at 2:30. Too much randomness. Maybe that's the type of music you make and it's supposed to be like that but my thing is you should do something with it not sound like you're all over the place like a guy ****ing around on an MPC controller. Once again, teasing seems to be what you like to do
You never make a melody longer than about 4 notes, it seems.Space Mix... oh I see... it's a spaced out futuristic sounding version of the other one. I like the Acid one better. Okay the UFO effect was a bit of a distraction and the beginning of it didn't sound good at all. I guess you want it for the space theme but around 2:00, it just sounded bad and annoying. Then in the 3rd minute it just seemed to fight the beat.
What samples are you using? The FL Studio defaults are
That's what those are, right?EDIT: Ignore my initial comments about the Acid Mix at 1:20. I was tripping. It still sounds weird to me but it's not literally off as far as I can tell.



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