1) the repetition of 'rhymes' and 'find' in the first stanza sounds a bit lazy and like you couldn't think of something else to say the second time you used those words.
2) the rapping sounds a little bit too slow for the beat, or maybe the beat is a little too fast for your rapping. if you slowed the beat down a couple of BPM i think it would sound better.
other than that, it's not too bad.

What a ****ty name.
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