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  • #16
    The fixed one is best... BK's is gay looking, naturally.
    I'm consitently stupid- Japher
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    • #17
      Here are some different colours.
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      • #18
        Some of the big Rs have no anti-alias, some have, is this WAD?
        Blah

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        • #19
          6 is bad. The others are all equally good imo.
          "You say that it is your custom to burn widows. Very well. We also have a custom: when men burn a woman alive, we tie a rope around their necks and we hang them. Build your funeral pyre; beside it, my carpenters will build a gallows. You may follow your custom. And then we will follow ours."--General Sir Charles James Napier

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          • #20
            I prefer the less blocky RX letters of 6 but it should be leaning forward to imply speed.
            We need seperate human-only games for MP/PBEM that dont include the over-simplifications required to have a good AI
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            • #21
              This is some bad graphic design. WAY too busy. Requires reproduction of both color and half-tones. having a background drop-shadow the same color as the main "RX" font is a bit wack. Having the cylinder art show through the lettering is a terrible idea. You need that "RX" to pop, so make it opaque. It will look OK on the Web and 4/C print, but not on a store signage or in any low-res medium. Congrats on managing to use 3 different fonts for a total of 3 words; impressive!

              I voted for 7, but it's the best of a bad lot.
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              • #22
                Well, after much design and redesign...and some more...Here is what I think should work. I'm pretty satisfied. And I made the RX clearly visible, you were right, its way better.

                Way different from the first one. So what do you think? Both are the same but with different backgrounds.



                And



                Notice how it would make the perfect bikini top.

                Thanks for the feedback, It really helps.

                Spec.
                Last edited by Spec; July 13, 2009, 06:20.
                -Never argue with an idiot; He will bring you down to his level and beat you with experience.

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                • #23
                  I voted 1, but I recommend moving the lettering off of the picture of the rotaries, as you've done in No. 2.

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                  • #24
                    Great.

                    Spec.
                    -Never argue with an idiot; He will bring you down to his level and beat you with experience.

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                    • #25
                      Is there a franchising requirement for the logo? Are you under specific restraints in terms of design?
                      John Brown did nothing wrong.

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                      • #26
                        That "Performance" (in the 2nd) and "Internationale" (in the 1st) really has to go.

                        Simple is better.
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                        • #27
                          Less contrast, more busy. Nothing pops; hard to read.
                          The word "performance" is basically unreadable.
                          White background might help.

                          Yuk.

                          But if your goal is "pretty yet hard to read," you're making progress.
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                          • #28
                            No. All those gradients and transparencies are bad. Pull it back several notches and see what it looks like.
                            "In the beginning was the Word. Then came the ******* word processor." -Dan Simmons, Hyperion

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                            • #29
                              Way too busy. Try adding an element at a time, and go from there. You've taken my idea for a non-white background, but employed it in such a way as to make it even less readable.
                              Scouse Git (2) La Fayette Adam Smith Solomwi and Loinburger will not be forgotten.
                              "Remember the night we broke the windows in this old house? This is what I wished for..."
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                              • #30
                                So, is this one better?



                                Thanks.

                                Spec.
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