Should I have enough support for this content, and noone would object to any of the wording, I am going to send this message:
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You showed renewed interest in peace, so I'm letting you know what sort of thing* GS would agree to:
- GS gets everything up to and including Eliopolis.
- GS will abandon Eliopolis and relocate it south of the 1-tile chokepoint.
- GS will trade iron to Vox free of charge.
Please understand, that we do not see peace as a viable option unless these terms are met. They are not negotiable - however, we are open to negotiations on other issues.
Please discuss this within your team, add whatever you want to add upon the concept described above and send back a formal message detailing your idea of a possible peace treaty between GS and Vox.
* I'm using informal language on purpose.
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Btw, how about asking that after the treaty is signed, the in-game state of war will remain for 10 turns (so we could still enjoy war unweariness) or until Vox is attacked and needs iron to perform troop upgrades (I know this leaves a window for a doublecross, where they will pretend to be attacked by GoW and ND but would really be assisting them - but by then, Vox won't be any threat to us at all).
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You showed renewed interest in peace, so I'm letting you know what sort of thing* GS would agree to:
- GS gets everything up to and including Eliopolis.
- GS will abandon Eliopolis and relocate it south of the 1-tile chokepoint.
- GS will trade iron to Vox free of charge.
Please understand, that we do not see peace as a viable option unless these terms are met. They are not negotiable - however, we are open to negotiations on other issues.
Please discuss this within your team, add whatever you want to add upon the concept described above and send back a formal message detailing your idea of a possible peace treaty between GS and Vox.
* I'm using informal language on purpose.
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Btw, how about asking that after the treaty is signed, the in-game state of war will remain for 10 turns (so we could still enjoy war unweariness) or until Vox is attacked and needs iron to perform troop upgrades (I know this leaves a window for a doublecross, where they will pretend to be attacked by GoW and ND but would really be assisting them - but by then, Vox won't be any threat to us at all).
So, maybe that part should be shifted elsewhere in your message, to keep it separated.


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