Muuuch better... ![thumbs-up](https://apolyton.net/core/images/smilies/thumbs-up.gif)
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In stead of "in previous positions" I would put "As a reserve officer with the US marine corps"... as long as you emphasise why your experience is relevant, no harm is done in mentioning where you got it from
I wouldn't put in any [Company information]. It is unnecessary and only adds to the burden of reading your letter. Besides, you might expect that those reading your cover letter know what their company is about.
![thumbs-up](https://apolyton.net/core/images/smilies/thumbs-up.gif)
2 comments:
In stead of "in previous positions" I would put "As a reserve officer with the US marine corps"... as long as you emphasise why your experience is relevant, no harm is done in mentioning where you got it from
I wouldn't put in any [Company information]. It is unnecessary and only adds to the burden of reading your letter. Besides, you might expect that those reading your cover letter know what their company is about.
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