A love song...

[orange]

haha, last night on Late late show That was great

I'm going to get her to call me boo dammnit!

Oh, um, you say Queen to much, and a lot of it sounds forced. And the numbers and single letter thing is lame.

[Sprayber]

Originally posted by David Floyd
Yeah, what exactly does that sentence mean, anyway? I can't decipher the gibberish

And what's a "boo"?

I think he means Beau pronouced Bo

[Asher]

There's so much to choose from, but this is my favorite part:

I want a unity of minds, tell U U pretty in rhymes,
Without corny simple lines, love your warm dimple lines,

[David Floyd]

Oh, you wrote it? I thought you copied and pasted it from somewhere.

In that case, it's probably better than I could do, but I still don't like that kind of music

[monkspider]

Well done Alb.

[Bas]

Not too bad. The Prince spelling is annoying though, and what's the point of the gangster references?

[Provost Harrison]

Wot iz rong wid da spellin?

[Bereta_Eder]

Better than Blur

[Provost Harrison]

Tell that to SD, paiktis

[Pekka]

better than my lyrics .. I don't like those number or U's either, but that doesn't mean there's something wrong with the lyrics, just writing. Clear effort can be seen, and it has a decent flow. I think it was pretty good.. keep up the good work!

[Az]

I think it's rather cute actually.

[Pekka]

though I have to admit, I did crack up after the first line . But keep working.. you seem to have some abilities in making lyrics IMO.