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  • A love song...

    Something I wrote...


    I know it's late, boo, but I knew I aint wake U,
    U know I'll wait 4 U, take pain 4 U,
    Stand in the rain 4 U, I'm a man who's staying true,
    Now I'm cold & wet, huddling in a warmer fleece,
    Old heads think I'm thugging on the corners & streets,
    I'm born 2 speak my words, in the night or day, all clear,
    I'll wipe away your tears, stay near & fight your fears,
    But I respect your strength & how U don't flinch,
    I was set 2 be your prince, so charming,
    But I was brining more harm in, fighting 4 a queen,
    Last night I had a dream of U, me, & that ocean breeze,
    My heartbeat increased like I was approaching police,
    Now I'm in a dark street, spending time hoping 4 peace,
    Please keep your mind open 2 me, even if I aint of worth,
    And I'm a give U the love U deserve,
    If U please can forgive a thug who hurts.


    I aint the man of your dreams, but I'll plan this scheme,
    That'll let me stand w/ a queen, be a man w/ esteem,
    In a land of dimes, U a queen, 4 your hand in mine, I fiend,
    In the dark seeing an angel, who'll end my heart being painful,
    I want a unity of minds, tell U U pretty in rhymes,
    Without corny simple lines, love your warm dimple lines,
    So I be trying 2 make U smile w/ sweet words,
    Even if it take a while cause I can barely speak words,
    So I write at night, the street heard my serenade,
    But I tear the page cause words don't express my need 4 aide,
    And my determination 2 win your heart,
    I aint about waiting 2 sin in the dark,
    Cause I'm above the sin of flesh, I move w/ finesse,
    I'll love my sultaness who I'll try 2 impress,
    W/ the street arabesque & my sweet caress,
    But I'm a be staying stressed til she saying yes.


    I be rapping poetry so U know it's me,
    Hoping you'll go w/ me & be my Isis, my queen,
    A wife is my dream, my life is mean, night is unseen,
    Til I see your smile, the light that beams,
    So let's hold hands & slow dance under the starlight all slow,
    I wonder how far sight go cause I can see heaven,
    And an angel helping, I'll be coping w/ hope & bliss,
    My wishes used 2 hurt me, my lips is thirsty,
    Sharing kisses like hershey, feeling your hips is curvy,
    You aint girly, U a lady that gave me bliss,
    From the start, U made me wish I'll win your heart,
    So in the day or dark, lay your head on my shoulder,
    I'll always hold ya, I said I'll be your souljah,
    U give me love I never had, so when the weather's bad,
    You my star who gave hope 2 my painful heart,
    And I couldn't cope without my angel in the dark.


    maybe because it's a love song, it won't get trashed like most of my songs get ****ted on... what yall think?


    thanks
    "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
    "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

  • #2
    you rhymed u with u. amazing.

    yup. rapper are the only ones writing their own lyrics these days
    "I've lived too long with pain. I won't know who I am without it. We have to leave this place, I am almost happy here."
    - Ender, from Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card

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    • #3
      UberKrux... i am insulted by someone who refers to himself as the demon warlod of the kruxidians? Say what?
      "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
      "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

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      • #4
        KH FOR OWNER!
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        • #5
          Sorry. I can't take any "song" seriously that replaces words with numbers and letters.
          "My nation is the world, and my religion is to do good." --Thomas Paine
          "The subject of onanism is inexhaustable." --Sigmund Freud

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          • #6
            "I'm moving to the Left" - Lancer

            "I imagine the neighbors on your right are estatic." - Slowwhand

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            • #7
              Yes, the whole bit about replacing words with letters and numbers sorta turned me off to the song, too.

              Also the usage of annoying phrases such as "I be", but oh well.
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              • #8
                It's........too much

                simplify...
                Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing?
                Then why call him God? - Epicurus

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                • #9
                  I didn't read much of it. I was laughing too hard to see after reading the first line...

                  I know it's late, boo, but I knew I aint wake U


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                  • #10
                    Yeah, what exactly does that sentence mean, anyway? I can't decipher the gibberish

                    And what's a "boo"?
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                    • #11
                      an old slang term for someone you like
                      "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
                      "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

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                      • #12
                        And what's a "boo"?


                        Significant other. Don't you listen to Kelly Rowland?
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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Albert Speer
                          UberKrux... i am insulted by someone who refers to himself as the demon warlod of the kruxidians? Say what?
                          Better demon warlord of the kruxidians then a nazi war criminal.
                          "I'm moving to the Left" - Lancer

                          "I imagine the neighbors on your right are estatic." - Slowwhand

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by Shi Huangdi


                            Better demon warlord of the kruxidians then a nazi war criminal.
                            "I've lived too long with pain. I won't know who I am without it. We have to leave this place, I am almost happy here."
                            - Ender, from Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card

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                            • #15
                              Don't you listen to Kelly Rowland?
                              No.
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