Looking for a Russian speaker

[Chris Wilkinson]

Hi,

I need something spell/grammer checked - http://www.civgaming.net/forums/show...=&postid=80846 - since I don't come to 'poly that often could you post any errors in the thread.

Thanks in advance

[Az]

You've got several errors. unfortunately, I don't have a russian keyboard so I cannot tell you where.

[FrustratedPoet]

bump

[Solver]

Ñorrected it all, got an error at posting... do they want me to do it again ?!?

&$&$ Poly!

[Panag]

hi ,

Muxec is one , and there are some other good Russian speakers around ,.....

have a nice day

[Solver]

No. Muxec has absolutely terrible language. He would better finish school first...

[Az]

ok, let me try this in western font.

è ïîåçäêà èçó÷èòåëüíûé îïûò â îäùåì è öåëîì

is incorrect and sounds unnatural. replace with

,eta poezdka bila obogochayuchem (enriching) opitom

don't forget the ' , ' before this part of the sentence.

ß ñãîðàþ îò íåòåðïåíèÿ åõàòü â Ðîññèþ åù¸ ðàç!

would better be

Ja s neterpeniyem jdu moyey (my) sleduchei (next) poyezdki (trip) v Rossiyu.

Çäåñü â Àíãëèè ÿ ðàâîòàþ â çàâîäå

should be replaced with:

Zdes v Angliye ya rabotayu na zavode

on a factory, not in a factory, is the way to say it in Russian.

î÷åíü ñêó÷íî íî ìíå íàäî äåíüãè íà ìîÿ óíèâåðñèòåòñêàÿ æèçíü.

would better be

eto ochen skuchno no mne nujni dengi (that's how you say that you need something which is plural) na moyu universitetskuyu jizn.

as you see you put an inclination into the whole last part of the sentence. Only 'jizn' remains the same.

ïîñëå íèõ ñîáñòâåííûé îòïóñê â Øîòëàíäèè

is better said as

posle ih (Without the N!) sobstvenogo (you're write a russian 'g' as the letter before the last one, while it's pronounced as a 'v') otpuska v Shotlanidii

íî ìîé áðàò ðàáîòàåò âñ¸ ëåòà â Þðêå.

amusingly enough, what you've just said can be interpreted as if your brother was paid for ****ging a guy named Yurka ( a shortened Yuri) the entire summer. But I am just sick. In any case, what you should've written this ( if your brother works in York, as I've understood. ):

No moy brat rabotayet vsyo leto v yorke

Ïîãîäà î÷åíü õîðîøî è æàðêî â Àíãëèè â òå÷åíèå ýòîâî ëåòà – íà ñàìîì äåëå ëó÷øå, ÷åì êîãäà-ëèáî!

is ( I've restructured the sentence a bit, to express that it's hotter than ever this summer in England, not that the weather is better than ever. )

pogoda ochen horosha, i v angliye v techeniye etoGo (note the g instead of the v! ) ochen jarko, na samom dele jarche chem kogda libo

 ïåðâóþ íåäåëþ ñåíòÿáðÿ ÿ óåçæó â Äóâàé, â Îáúåäèí¸ííûõ àðàáñêèõ ýìèðàòàõ â Áëèæïîì Âîñòîêå ñ äðóçüÿìè – òàì äàæå æàðêå!

is either

V pervuyu nedelyu sentyabrya ya uyezjayu v duBai v obyedinyenih arabskih emiratah NA blijnem vostoke s druzyami - tam daje jarche ( Not 'ke' but 'che' in the and as in chech republic

or

V pervuyu nedelyu sentyabrya ya uyedu v duBai v obyedinyenih arabskih emiratah NA blijnem vostoke s druzyami - tam daje jarche ( Not 'ke' but 'che' in the and as in chech republic

the difference being "I'll be leaving" in the first one and "I will leave" in the 2nd.


Cheers.

[Bereta_Eder]

a spaciba i think is in order

[Az]

long time no see paiktis. I hope life has treated you well?

[Bereta_Eder]

not today no. but thanks for asking
hope you're doing well

[Az]

so so. Had a great vacation in London, though.

[Bereta_Eder]

yeah i saw the pics
glad you had a nice time

[Chris Wilkinson]

Cool

Thanks mate!

I've put a new version at http://www.civgaming.net/forums/show...0909#post80909 - could you just give it one final spellcheck just to make sure I haven't done any typos...

a spaciba i think is in order

A big one at that!

[Solver]

Uhmm, still a couple of mistakes, you better hold on .

[Chris Wilkinson]

Nuts, I'm crap at trans-literation