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**Al B. Sure!** · July 20, 2003, 01:39

cough...

**Drake Tungsten** · July 20, 2003, 01:41

Am I the only one who thought this might be about baseball after looking at the title?

**Al B. Sure!** · July 20, 2003, 01:43

lol

**Dis** · July 20, 2003, 02:45

you might want to take something for that cough

**st_swithin** · July 20, 2003, 07:54

I suggest something from a water pipe.

**Al B. Sure!** · July 22, 2003, 01:22

one last time up...

**monkspider** · July 22, 2003, 01:32

Hey Alb, I checked out your latest two tunes, and I have to say that they're both really strong. The "Help Wanted" tune is especially profound because of it's strong philosophical message, and "My Girl" is a good love-ballad.

My only critiques would be that "My girl" is just screaming for a catchy chorus of some sort, easier said than done, I know, but that could really put this ish on the map. Also, I am just little bit skeptical toward the production of "Help Wanted". I thought that it could use a more sorrowful beat of some sort , to help the mood and all.

Other than that, extremely strong offerings as per usual Alb.

**Al B. Sure!** · July 22, 2003, 01:41

profound cause of its strong philosophical message? lol man... it was just some **** i put together while looking for a job. but if you take a deep meaning from it...

but really? the beat from Help Wanted don't sound sorrowful? i thought it did sound kind of dark and all that but alright.

as for My Girl... you do realize that it was an extended pun/metaphor right? you know it wasn't a love song to a girl, right?

but thanks for listening... much more than i can say for other people in this thread

**monkspider** · July 22, 2003, 01:45

Originally posted by Albert Speer
profound cause of its strong philosophical message? lol man... it was just some **** i put together while looking for a job. but if you take a deep meaning from it...

but really? the beat from Help Wanted don't sound sorrowful? i thought it did sound kind of dark and all that but alright.

The beat was good, I am just saying that it is the one area that could maybe optimized a little.

as for My Girl... you do realize that it was an extended pun/metaphor right? you know it wasn't a love song to a girl, right?

Well, I knew some of it was tongue-in-cheek, but I didn't get all of it. If it is all a pun, then that makes it even more brilliant.

but thanks for listening... much more than i can say for other people in this thread

Anytime, dog. Keep creating this ill ****.

**Al B. Sure!** · July 22, 2003, 01:50

Monkspider:

listen to My Girl again... 'my girls' are guns...

it should have been obvious from the third line... "I still say **** her safety, so lately, she's always ready"... the whole thing is about guns

**monkspider** · July 22, 2003, 01:53

Oh alright, that's pretty clever.

**Al B. Sure!** · July 22, 2003, 02:00

haha alright monkspider... you liked help wanted better though? ironically, it took a lot more effort to write My Girl than Help Wanted though... lol. coming up with the deep philosophical **** is easy

but man listen to my girl again... you'll be hitting yourself cause you didn't realize that ****.

**monolith94** · July 22, 2003, 02:30

Hey speer - what did you think of the five year old rapper who was on the jimmy kimmel show tonight?

**Al B. Sure!** · July 22, 2003, 02:34

You mean the puerto rican kid who was in the 50 cent video for ****sta?

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