Hi,
"we had PAL back out of" sounds like PAL has sent us a message saying "sorry, after all we've decided not to do the trade we had agreed to earlier", which wasn't what happened. What happened was worse, that they just turned their back on us without any communication at all. Could we somehow convey this? Maybe "...back out of without even talking to us", "back out of without any warning" or something like this?
Otherwise, it sounds good!
-Kylearan
"we had PAL back out of" sounds like PAL has sent us a message saying "sorry, after all we've decided not to do the trade we had agreed to earlier", which wasn't what happened. What happened was worse, that they just turned their back on us without any communication at all. Could we somehow convey this? Maybe "...back out of without even talking to us", "back out of without any warning" or something like this?
Otherwise, it sounds good!
-Kylearan
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