Well, History Guy, I had time to read through your text more carefully and I'm even more impressed than I was the first time, very good stuff
I can't come up with many comments but there are these minor issues:
* Maybe (just maybe) you want to consider adding somewhere that the Phoenicians, when under foreign (mainly Persian) rule, had a large degree of freedom and never really became part of the empires that ruled over them (until Alexander came along, that is). Their rulers needed them too much to suppress them so they were particularly kind to the Phoenicians, taxing them lightly and requesting help from their navy rather than forcing them to provide it. Comparable to the way the Greeks were treated by the Romans.
* Shame on you!
So knowlegdeable about Phoenician history and yet you claim Carthage lies in present-day Morocco? Carthage (I personally prefer Carthago, the name used by the Romans and Greeks) lies in Tunesia of course, only a few miles from Tunis. They did have plenty of other colonies in Morocco (and Tunesia, Libya and Algeria) so the mistake is an understandable one.
* As much as I'd like to believe it myself, the claimed circumvention of Africa by Hanno is not backed up with any sort of evidence. Historians are actually divided on whether or not it actually happened (some believe Hanno only sailed to the Gold Coast, thought that was the 'bottom' of Africa and sailed back). It might not be wise to present it as a hard fact (just adding the word 'possibly', 'apparently' or 'allegedly' or whatever somewhere would be sufficient to make it historically 'correct' IMHO).
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I can't come up with many comments but there are these minor issues:
* Maybe (just maybe) you want to consider adding somewhere that the Phoenicians, when under foreign (mainly Persian) rule, had a large degree of freedom and never really became part of the empires that ruled over them (until Alexander came along, that is). Their rulers needed them too much to suppress them so they were particularly kind to the Phoenicians, taxing them lightly and requesting help from their navy rather than forcing them to provide it. Comparable to the way the Greeks were treated by the Romans.
* Shame on you!
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* As much as I'd like to believe it myself, the claimed circumvention of Africa by Hanno is not backed up with any sort of evidence. Historians are actually divided on whether or not it actually happened (some believe Hanno only sailed to the Gold Coast, thought that was the 'bottom' of Africa and sailed back). It might not be wise to present it as a hard fact (just adding the word 'possibly', 'apparently' or 'allegedly' or whatever somewhere would be sufficient to make it historically 'correct' IMHO).
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