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  • #16
    Well, I'm back. My appointment went pretty well. At least nobody wound up drunk and no shots were fired. But I digress...

    When considering SE aspects of the "Forgotten Faction", I'm still a little puzzled myself on what those should actually be. Definitely a plus on both morale and growth. If we follow the stereotype for people like this, i.e., a bit on the lazy side, then that might translate into a minus on industry. However, I don't think the stereotype applies all that well.

    I hadn't thought much about "Planned" economy, but I think Jakjon is correct on that. Neither "planning" nor efficiency seem to be real high at the moment. Nor do I know if efficiency is going to change much. Planning most probably will remain at some state near to chaos.

    Research actually has me a bit puzzled. I honestly can't say at this point whether there is a strong aversion to "book learnin'" or simply a lack of opportunity. They are actually going to do a little bit of work along those lines throughout the course of the story, but not in a "formal environment" such as a university or research center. But they are very curious and like to "figger things out". If the Believers are a "-2" on Research because of a strong distrust or antipathy toward "worldly science", then at worst I would give the "Forgotten Faction" no more than a "-1". Also, I don't think I would stick them with the inability to choose "Knowledge".

    I hadn't thought about their optimal Values setting until you raised the question. Actually, I don't think any of the game settings, Power, Knowledge, or Wealth, apply as desired settings or aversions either one. That probably makes them a hybrid faction. Usually, the warmonger and builder factions have particular values settings they either want or avoid. Usually, the hybrids can move among the three with equal ease, depending on the situation.

    At this particular point, I would be inclined to give them a "-1" for efficiency and a "-1" for police. This could be a particularly troublesome combination at the beginning of the game, especially as they tried to expand. I would give them a "+2" for growth, a "+1" for morale, and possibly a "+1" for support. I think I would accept any political setting, but give them an aversion to a Planned economy (actually, the more I think about it, the more "correct" that sounds). If they get a "+1" for support, I might be inclined to give them a "-1" for research. I'm not sure I would alter any of the other settings.

    The other interesting questions are: (1) What is their research agenda? (2) What starting tech? (3) Are there any favored SE settings? (4) What is their personality?

    I'm not sure I have a clue on how to answer these questions yet, except to say they are definitely erratic in personality. As far as starting tech, I would probably choose Social Psych, so they can build a Rec Commons fairly early. They haven't done much Exploring, Building, Discovering, or Conquering, so maybe they should use double-blind research?

    As soon as we get this nailed down, I shall be forced to go into the faction editor, build them, and then play them a while. From the storyline, the factions that they will be most involved with are: Spartans, UoP/Cyborgs (pick one), Morganites, Usurpers, Caretakers, and Believers. That will be a pretty decent mix.

    Any other thoughts or comments?

    A couple of comments on chapter 5:

    There actually is (or was) a town in West Virginia named Stonecoal.

    The character of "Gayle Storm" was outlined the way she was written from the very beginning, though the name was selected from the forum. The name is an alias for the (in)famous "Googlie". Her assistant, Paula Forbes, was originally outlined as a male character, but I changed the gender to female so I could use the name "Paula Forbes", which is another penname for "Googlie". This in effect makes Googlie Googlie's assistant, and that was just too good to pass up. We'll have to see if this has strange psychological ramifications of some sort.

    The Progenitor character was unnamed, and the name selected just seemed perfect to me. I would bet that Jakjon never saw that coming.

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    Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...
    Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...

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    • #17
      Uh... yeah, you could say that. (:-] (My personal smily- I call it grunt smily. Note the helmet "(" ) You've captured quite a few aspects of myself, actually. Before I got put on Adderall, I'd sleep a lot in school. My body got trained to take 40-minute naps to correspond to the lengths of the periods.
      I agree with your social modifiers. (I have this bizarre tendency to make really large modifiers mostly because they let us do that.)
      As to their preference, if it isn't power, than I think they would lean towards "Frontier-Survival-None-None." But we cannot choose that. So I wouldn't set a preference.
      Technologically, if they like hunting and fishing, they might like boats and guns- explore and conquer. But then again, I can't imagine a bunch of them going to sea on a Cruiser packing a Chaos gun and fishing USING the gun.
      Maybe they should just get an automatic rec center at each base, due to the fact that their lifestyle involves having fun hunting and fishing, and they don't need to build a rec center to do that.

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      --President Jakjon
      --Datalinks
      [This message has been edited by President Jakjon (edited February 11, 2000).]
      [This message has been edited by President Jakjon (edited February 13, 2000).]
      --President Jakjon
      --Datalinks

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      • #18


        Great, OldCodger

        (from another old codger)

        Googlie

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        • #19
          Chap. 5: LOL!

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          • #20
            If you come looking for the Tuesday, Feb 15, edition of "The Forgotten Faction", you will find that it is not there.

            Unfortunately, I am a bit behind in my writing. I anticipate posting chapter 6 in Friday, but it hasn't been completed yet, so I can't promise anything.

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            Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...
            Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...

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            • #21
              Chapter 6: HAHAHAHA!!

              This story is great! Keep up the excellent work.
              Banned on Black Saturday in the name of those who went before him.

              Realizes that no one probably remembers that event.

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              • #22
                The "log chain around the axle trick" ... LOL!

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                • #23
                  ummm... i'm not dead, am i...?

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                  i've had the poison leak into my skin
                  and it corroded my heart away

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                  • #24
                    EdgeCrusher,

                    I guess you'll just have to keep reading and find out, won't you?


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                    Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...
                    Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...

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                    • #25
                      The latest chapter is excellent! (Though I would have thought that Res-3 axles were tougher...? Maybe they're unarmored. Yes, that's it.)

                      I'm actually a catatonic drunk... I just stare at the bottle thinking, "I seem to have drunk a lot. I should stop drinking. I can't move. I can't drink more."

                      But that was hilarious! So, violins make progenitors drunk... interesting. And this bit about the radios, well, it suggests recording technology, but also a generalized lack of economic unity...

                      If there was some way one could give a combat bonus against just alien factions, that would be good, because of the violins, of course. Keep going! Those of you who haven't checked up on my personal thread: chapter four is up!

                      (PS: It's 1:36 AM and the dextroamphetimine has worn off, which is why I am jabbering and making little sense, I think.)

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                      --President Jakjon
                      --Datalinks
                      --President Jakjon
                      --Datalinks

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                      • #26
                        Some brief comments on chapter 6. First, the name of the faction has finally been revealed. In case you missed it, they are the Hillbillies. Second, you can deduce where the chapter titles come from. They are all candidate names for really bad country-western songs. If you have any really bad song titles you'd like to share, please feel free to send them to me. I can't guarantee they will get used, but if they do, I will credit the title and offer my most sincere thanks.

                        Overall, the story is progressing a little slower than I originally thought. Once one gets into the process, the characters seem to take on a life of their own. They are trying to "bend" the tale into something different than I had originally outlined. I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens...

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                        Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...
                        Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...

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                        • #27
                          Another great chapter! Keep them coming!

                          I know that everyone has their own style, but the Hillbillies seem a tad casualty-proof. (Maybe they should get an even bigger defense bonus than I was thinking about...) A chaos gun is rather powerful, having eight times the firepower of, say, an automatic grenade launcher. If someone hosed my brick-and-stucco-and-stone house with a grenade launcher, it would be more that "a little shot up." So, it seemed a tad odd that a wooden structure suffered as little damage as you described.

                          I also think that the Usurpers wouldn't lie about the battle. They don't dig competition. They also have an even more disciplined military culture than the Spartans. Of course, they would bend the truth to their own ends. Their report would probably be that the Hillbillies "disabled" the rover.

                          However, as I said before, if these elements are an essential element of your writing style, then keep them. Your story is hilarious and fascinating, and I look forward to the next chapter.

                          As always, I would like to take this chance to push my own thread- chapter four, titled "Fifteen Minutes" is up.

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                          --President Jakjon
                          --Datalinks
                          [This message has been edited by President Jakjon (edited February 26, 2000).]
                          --President Jakjon
                          --Datalinks

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                          • #28
                            at least i'm not dead...

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                            i've had the poison leak into my skin
                            and it corroded my heart away

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                            • #29
                              "A single death is a tragedy, a million deaths a statistic." -attributed to Joseph Stalin.

                              Don't be too sure. After all, the Believers control that console. Perhaps the real message was "The Walrus was Paul" which means "I'm about to die."

                              Or something like that.

                              (:-|

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                              --President Jakjon
                              --Datalinks
                              --President Jakjon
                              --Datalinks

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                              • #30
                                **poke poke** hey, are you done with the next chapter? or what?

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                                i've had the poison leak into my skin
                                and it corroded my heart away

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