Comments on the Wizard of Chiron

[Jasonian]

No shame in that. It adds more fun to the story if you use other names.

Jasonian is a drone at heart. We would make a good supervisor, in either the Free Drones faction or the drone population of another faction.

[Captain Kirk]

I think I want to be a Believer. That is if you don't mind.

[Raging Mouse]

I don't mind at all. As I said, I'll take your wishes into account. Only if one faction becomes very popular while others have none I might choose another faction for you.

[Bearcat]

Great story. Keep up the good work. You have great detail in the realtion of the MMI. Most people don't go in to such detail. I think I'd be a Cyborg.

[Raging Mouse]

Any specific Greek letter/modern number you´d prefer, Bearcat?

[EternalSpark]

I dunno what you could do with my name but I would like to be in the story, somewhere... maybe I can be... hell, I dunno, its your story..

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Eternal Spark
As you command, Megatron...

[Bearcat]

Hmm how about Omega-7?

[OldCodger]

I like your story line real well. I've never really thought of the Cybernetic Conciousness as "sinister", but your portrayal of them thus far is definitely unsettling to me.

Feel free to use my handle in your story line if you wish. The Gaians and Spartans tend to be my two favorite factions (rather odd combination isn't it?).

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Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...

[korn469]

great story! i love every single line, so keep on writing

korn469

[Raging Mouse]

That's chapter fourteen up! I want to thank all of you for the positive feedback. Know that there's much more yet to come. In fact, I can't see where the story will end...

Chapters will probably be posted at the rate of one per day for some time now. Hope you'll be able to keep up.
[This message has been edited by Raging Mouse (edited March 30, 2000).]

[Vi Vicdi]

Great story! Keep up the good work!

[edgecrusher]

wow... very nice. i'm literally on the edge of my seat. it put a sparkle into an otherwise ****ty day so far.

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follow close, the train of fools
just like them, (could be) just like you
-their eyes don't seem right.

[OldCodger]

Your story is coming along really well. I have to admit that I'm passing through this forum once or twice per day to see if anything new is up.

I really like your portrayal of your characters. They have, well, "character". Even though some your characters overlap with those in other story lines, i.e., the various faction leaders, your portrayal of them is unique, consistent, and very valid.

All this and you say you don't know where this story is going yet? I'm looking forward to continuing this ride with you.

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Old age and treachery: the perfect cure for youth and ambition...

[Jasonian]

Ahh... I've come back to life!

[Raging Mouse]

Indeed you have. I'm afraid you won't be appearing for some time now, but you (and Bearcat) can look forward to appearing again; Bearcat in chapter 28 and you in chapter 30-ish.. I know, because I'm busy writing it.

But until then, stay tuned.