i made a rap song about homosexuals

[Al B. Sure!]

Tell me what you think:

http://snd.sc/KQd2Y3

Pride (and Prejudice)
Instrumental from "Life" by Proof and J Dilla (RIP both)


Thank you

[Alexander's Horse]

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[DaShi]

Yeah, I don't have to click that link to know that this was a bad idea.

[OzzyKP]

Pretty darn good actually.

I like Fat Stinky Bish best though.

I didn't know Alby could rap. Well done.

[Al B. Sure!]

I didn't know Alby could rap.

Well that's debatable. Figured you'd like my video game song better, though. I'm hesitant to share that Fat Stinky Bish song with people because people get offended easily.

Thank you for checking them out, though.


Still hoping one of our gay guys comes through and checks it out and tells me what they think.

[Zoetstofzoetje]

there's something wrong with your microphone. the voice sounds a bit off, hissing. also, your country is backwards.

[OzzyKP]

Yea, the production quality is definitely lacking. But I wasn't expecting much in that department.

[Al B. Sure!]

Yeah I'm using a Logitech USB computer mic in a room not set up for recording. I wanted to get my delivery down before I spend money on a pre-amp and what not. I have a shure sm58 (not the best recording mic but still the best omni for its price) but I need a pre-amp to use it.

[b etor]

Pretty darn good actually.

I like Fat Stinky Bish best though.

I didn't know Alby could rap. Well done.

I also preferred Fat Stinky Bish. Just as catchy as Rack City.

[Al B. Sure!]

See that's the problem with hip hop right now Everyone likes me busting on a fat chick more than me rapping about gay rights.

[b etor]

gays > fat chicks

(in the better than sense, not the 'greater than' sense)

[Al B. Sure!]

gays > fat chicks

(in the better than sense, not the 'greater than' sense)

Yeah it'll take a lot of gays to equal even one fat chick, so definitely not the greater than sense.

[Tupac Shakur]

Still hoping one of our gay guys comes through and checks it out and tells me what they think.

You're improving. Your flow is still inconsistent and a lot of your rhymes don't work (secret/decent and demanded/marriage were especially jarring), but you had some strong sections (:20 to :48 in particular, where a solid and interesting flow makes up for some failed rhymes). Keep practicing.

[Tupac Shakur]

Flow is better on "Pride (and Prejudice)", but "Fat Stinky Bish" has better rhymes, probably because you weren't trying so hard to seem erudite.

[Sava]

gays > fat chicks

(in the better than sense, not the 'greater than' sense)

disagree
fat chicks can lose weight and become ****able
although gay guys are well-groomed, well-dressed men (often with lots of disposable income) who don't compete for women

hmmm i change my mind

agree