I appreciate the offer, Alby, but by the time I'm through with the school-mandated revision process I will already be sick to death of working on them.
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Originally posted by Asher View PostWhy would somebody who went to Church University and has no job be offering essay critiquing skills?“As a lifelong member of the Columbia Business School community, I adhere to the principles of truth, integrity, and respect. I will not lie, cheat, steal, or tolerate those who do.”
"Capitalism ho!"
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To a published author.Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.
"Hating America is something best left to Mobius. He is an expert Yank hater.
He also hates Texans and Australians, he does diversify." ~ Braindead
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Frankly, I write brilliant essays. I received excellent marks in my artsy courses (history and psychology mostly) by bull****ting my way through essays. I was always amused by how much people stress out about them.
The only difficulty was reining in my inherent trolling."The issue is there are still many people out there that use religion as a crutch for bigotry and hate. Like Ben."
Ben Kenobi: "That means I'm doing something right. "
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Originally posted by Hauldren Collider View PostI appreciate the offer, Alby, but by the time I'm through with the school-mandated revision process I will already be sick to death of working on them."Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
"I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi
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I'm also pretty sure "use ironing" is proper, not "use an ironing"."The issue is there are still many people out there that use religion as a crutch for bigotry and hate. Like Ben."
Ben Kenobi: "That means I'm doing something right. "
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Originally posted by Asher View Postcomma splice
I'm also pretty sure "use ironing" is proper, not "use an ironing".
Anyway, how I type posts on Apolyton is on the fly and more similar to speaking than actually something I think much about.
For HC's college application essays, I'll think."Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
"I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi
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Originally posted by Hauldren Collider View PostWho are you responding to, Sloww?
Originally posted by Al B. Sure! View PostAre you going to post them here for us to critique?
I'll help you! (Actually, really, if I feel like it, I'll help you refine your essays. I'm much better at it than you think. Don't use Apolyton postings as an example of my writing skill)Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.
"Hating America is something best left to Mobius. He is an expert Yank hater.
He also hates Texans and Australians, he does diversify." ~ Braindead
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You were offering yor services to HC? Sorry, I thought you meant to Galnemer. I see I got lost.Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.
"Hating America is something best left to Mobius. He is an expert Yank hater.
He also hates Texans and Australians, he does diversify." ~ Braindead
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Originally posted by Al B. Sure! View Post
Is HC a published author? What did he publish?"The issue is there are still many people out there that use religion as a crutch for bigotry and hate. Like Ben."
Ben Kenobi: "That means I'm doing something right. "
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Originally posted by SlowwHand View PostYou were offering yor services to HC? Sorry, I thought you meant to Galnemer. I see I got lost.
Originally posted by Al B. Sure! View Post
Originally posted by Hauldren Collider View PostWhat is the magic potion your wife drinks in order to write books so quickly, and where can I get it? I could use it for all the college application essays I have to write this semester.
I'll help you! (Actually, really, if I feel like it, I'll help you refine your essays. I'm much better at it than you think. Don't use Apolyton postings as an example of my writing skill)
I don't see it. I quoted HC and responded directly to him."Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
"I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi
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Originally posted by Asher View PostHe's a critically acclaimed author of Buffy slashfic. You seriously didn't know?"Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
"I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi
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