(Teh properly punctuated part, I might add)
March 26, 2008
Dear Mr. LS:
On behalf of Harvard Business School, I am genuinely pleased to offer you a place in the MBA Class of 2010.
After careful consideration of all aspects of your application, we believe you have the ability to thrive at Harvard Business School and be a leader who makes a difference in the world. Our rigorous, interactive, and practice-oriented learning model will demand the very best of you and your classmates and will provide a firm foundation for any career path you may choose.
We hope that you will accept our offer to join the Harvard community of students, faculty, staff, and alumni - a membership that extends far beyond the borders of our campus and lasts a lifetime. In the coming weeks we will be connecting with you in a variety of ways to ensure that you have all the resources you need to make this important decision.
Our Prematriculation Web site will be your main source of information over the next few months. It will direct you to key activities that will help you learn more about HBS; in addition, it highlights personalized requirements and/or recommendations and logistics related to joining HBS. You can immediately access the Prematriculation Web site by using your username: lol, email domain: mba2010.hbs.edu, and password: lol. Should you need any assistance, please contact us at prematric@hbs.edu or 617.496.0902.
Your offer of admission is exclusively for the MBA Class of 2010, entering in September 2008, and it is contingent upon the verification of your academic transcript(s), verification of your employment history, an offical response to our offer, and a tuition deposit.
You may respond to our offer of admission at any time through our Admissions Acceptance Form.
I encourage you to contact me if I can be of any assistance; I hope I may have the pleasure of welcoming you personally to campus.
Sincerely,
Deirdre C. Leopold
Managing Director, MBA Admissions & Financial Aid
Dear Mr. LS:
On behalf of Harvard Business School, I am genuinely pleased to offer you a place in the MBA Class of 2010.
After careful consideration of all aspects of your application, we believe you have the ability to thrive at Harvard Business School and be a leader who makes a difference in the world. Our rigorous, interactive, and practice-oriented learning model will demand the very best of you and your classmates and will provide a firm foundation for any career path you may choose.
We hope that you will accept our offer to join the Harvard community of students, faculty, staff, and alumni - a membership that extends far beyond the borders of our campus and lasts a lifetime. In the coming weeks we will be connecting with you in a variety of ways to ensure that you have all the resources you need to make this important decision.
Our Prematriculation Web site will be your main source of information over the next few months. It will direct you to key activities that will help you learn more about HBS; in addition, it highlights personalized requirements and/or recommendations and logistics related to joining HBS. You can immediately access the Prematriculation Web site by using your username: lol, email domain: mba2010.hbs.edu, and password: lol. Should you need any assistance, please contact us at prematric@hbs.edu or 617.496.0902.
Your offer of admission is exclusively for the MBA Class of 2010, entering in September 2008, and it is contingent upon the verification of your academic transcript(s), verification of your employment history, an offical response to our offer, and a tuition deposit.
You may respond to our offer of admission at any time through our Admissions Acceptance Form.
I encourage you to contact me if I can be of any assistance; I hope I may have the pleasure of welcoming you personally to campus.
Sincerely,
Deirdre C. Leopold
Managing Director, MBA Admissions & Financial Aid
Comment