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  • Enticing girl by PM need help!

    From a local Calgary board... trying to meet up with her based on her supposed interests and a nice pretty picture. Tear this apart to make it your version of best, please!

    (Note... the girl posts very poorly, just bad casual freehand so I'm not grammar crazy here)


    Hey Erin
    This is James... regular 21 year old student, seemingly with a few of the same tastes as yours
    I've been trying to meet a lot of E*** people lately... hehe and to tell the truth, was first drawn to your sig love of techno by glance. so I'm wondering if you'd like to come to the NYLA tech/progressive night tonight and meet up? I can't do the "have a few beers" thing this time... but dancing and intro to any others who might show up will be fun

    let me know; zylka@hotmail.com

    later,
    J

  • #2
    My intent, as you must wonder...

    On the boards (only reason I feel ok saying it here) the girl stated she was a 22 year old with a first arts degree completed... taking time off before the second and works in retail (self described starving artist). Says she's a virgin even at 22, and from her pics she's really quite pretty??? (...and she bakes like a pro)

    This is the kind of girl I can actually make a sincere relationship with... I think. That's what I need for the newer, gentler, happy me!

    Damn, where are you Apoc? This is the type of stuff we sort out without outside help.

    Please don't close this... it's a look at me but for a potentially wonderful thing

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    • #3
      Seems fine as is.
      Tutto nel mondo è burla

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      • #4
        what about the "hehe" - doesn't that lead to a sense of (although) comical doubt in ones' intent?

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        • #5
          or does it lighten the mood...

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          • #6
            Strategicking ICQd me problems with that same line. He says to change:

            ....hehe and to tell the truth, was first drawn to your sig love of techno by glance.

            with:

            I was really drawn to your sig. I am a HUGE techno lover and think we SHOULD meet at NY/LA and enjoy the music together.

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            • #7
              Don't capitalize SHOULD. Too much caps makes you look like a freak.

              Honestly, don't sweat a PM too much, and don't go meeting her with the mentality that it must lead to a relationship. Too often, people will come across as forced and desperate when they approach a situation like that. Meet as friends, keep it relaxed and cool and fun.
              Tutto nel mondo è burla

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              • #8
                The 'hehe' could go, but it's not terrible at all... And DON'T capitilize should! It's JUST wrong ZYLKA!!!

                "That's what I need for the newer, gentler, happy me!"

                Awwwwwwwww!
                "mono has crazy flow and can rhyme words that shouldn't, like Eminem"
                Drake Tungsten
                "get contacts, get a haircut, get better clothes, and lose some weight"
                Albert Speer

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                • #9
                  hehe does make you sound more open.

                  "I am a HUGE techno lover and think we SHOULD meet at NY/LA and enjoy the music together."
                  Good if you are sure she really likes techno. The capitalized should needs to go. Personally I'd change it to "ought" since ought implies obligation to some people.

                  The pm seems good. Sorry I wasn't on earlier, I lying in bed, thinking about a certain comment. Not really. I was still asleep when you posted. That is the reason I didn't post an hour ago.
                  "Yay Apoc!!!!!!!" - bipolarbear
                  "At least there were some thoughts went into Apocalypse." - Urban Ranger
                  "Apocalype was a great game." - DrSpike
                  "In Apoc, I had one soldier who lasted through the entire game... was pretty cool. I like apoc for that reason, the soldiers are a bit more 'personal'." - General Ludd

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                  • #10
                    Re: Enticing girl by PM need help!

                    Hi Erin,

                    James here, Remember me? The 21 year old student? How are you doing? Seeing that you a fan of techo, I'd like to invite you to the NYLA tech/progressive night tonight. It'll be a blast, meeting people, dancing, listening to music.
                    (\__/) 07/07/1937 - Never forget
                    (='.'=) "Claims demand evidence; extraordinary claims demand extraordinary evidence." -- Carl Sagan
                    (")_(") "Starting the fire from within."

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                    • #11
                      Casually drop references to your 12 inch penis into conversations that she'll be likely to read.

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                      • #12
                        I really like yours UA but I just sent a really minimal draft... Thanks for the help guys

                        Hey Erin
                        This is James... 21 year old student, seemingly with a few of the same tastes as yours
                        I've been trying to meet a few E**** people lately... to tell the truth, was first drawn to your sig love of techno by glance. I'm wondering if you'd like to come to the NYLA tech/progressive night tonight and meet up?

                        let me know; zylka@hotmail.com

                        later,
                        J

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                        • #13
                          Let us know what happens, ok loverboy?

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by Gibsie
                            Casually drop references to your 12 inch penis into conversations that she'll be likely to read.


                            You have no idea how timely that was. Seriously.

                            Anyway, since she is a virgin that'd probably scare her away, though it would be the circumference that'd be more of a problem.
                            "Yay Apoc!!!!!!!" - bipolarbear
                            "At least there were some thoughts went into Apocalypse." - Urban Ranger
                            "Apocalype was a great game." - DrSpike
                            "In Apoc, I had one soldier who lasted through the entire game... was pretty cool. I like apoc for that reason, the soldiers are a bit more 'personal'." - General Ludd

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                            • #15
                              Well being a virgin she won't know that yet.

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