I need to write a column for a fictional newspaper as part of my history course for this year, and is 20% of my final mark. Could you please read over it, give it your comments and help me improve it?
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Germany was an extraordinary nation from 1870 to 1945. German attitudes were not always the same because, naturally, temperaments varied in the different regions. There were the Prussians, aristocratic, militant, the North Germans, hard working and stubborn, the Rhinelanders, easy going and pleasure loving, and the Bavarians, good humoured and convivial. Nevertheless, in times of national crisis and war, they all supported a German point of view on the world around them (I believe the word is Weltanschaunng.)
Three times in less than a century, Germans made war on their European neighbours, ruining the stable conditions of nearly a dozen sovereign nations - in 1870, 1914 and 1939. Bismarck's dream of a German hegemony started an expansion beyond regional borders and carried on over into the ambitions of Kaiser Wilhelm and the class of 1914. Politicians ans soldiers alike joined in the patriotic anthem, Deutschland Uber Alles.
With the declaration of war in 1914, the British Foregin Secretary, Sir Edward Grey, uttered his prophetic words: "The lamps are going out all over Europe. We shall not see them lit again in our lifetime." The chaos inside Germany following 1918 led to the rise of Hitler and the take over of all German institutions by the Nazi Party. The ill-concieved Treaty of Versailles and Treaty of St. Germain had destroyed the the Austro-Hungarian Empire and left a vast area of central Europe ripe for conquest by a resurrected German Army. It was, frankly, a vacuum waiting to be filled. Hitler first imposed his regime on Austria by internal subversion, then marched into Czechoslovakia. To Hitler, international treaties were bits of paper to be torn up when he saw fit. In 1939, he was ready to invade Poland. The era of Blitzkreig had begun.
Ordinary Germans, hypnotised yet again by false promises of a glorious future, began the war believing in the cause of a Greater Germany and enjoying the first, easy victories. But on the battlefields of Russia and in the west they lost their innocence. Those who lived to see what happened later were overcome by grief.
This sentiment was echoed in a German song called Sag mir wo die Blumen sind. The words expressed nostalgia and heartache for the years of sacrifice. "Where have all the flowers gone? Long long ago the girls gave them to their young me. And where have the young me gone? Gone to be soldiers, every one. So tell me where the flowers the flowers are. They are growing on the soldiers' graves." It was the lament of a generation.
Looking back on the war, a question comes up again and again. How was it possible that so many people could be pressed into service to make war against the countires of Europe. Is there something in the history of the Germans going back to Attilla the Hun which accounts for their ambitions? Some commentators have noted that the Roman Empire stopped at the Rhine and consequently it's civilising influence did not reach the territories of the Barbarians.
A more likely explanation is the Germans, like the Dutch, the French and the British were in the forefront of Europe's industrial and commercial expansion of the nineteenth and early twentieth centuries. Rivalry in the search for raw material, markets, sphers of influence powered a relentless drive to achieve dominion and wealth and the Germans did not have a balanced political system to contain it. The great majority of people had to follow the lead of whoever was in power of the central government. Those unlucky enough to see what was happening and objected, "disappeared".
That the enigma of Germany lies in pessures from international politcs is what many people believe to be the reason for the eruptions of the past which culminated in the two world wars. Historical influences continuously shift from on national movement to another until suddenly circumstances arise when, like the opening of a strong room door by turning a code sequence in the lock, the counters click into place and war is inevitable.
The effect on people living in the areas of conflict leaves them with the imperitive of meeting the challenge in one way or another and seeking an adjustment to the situation. Take the people of the Channel Islands for example. When they think back to the occupation, their memories linger first on the harsh rules laid by the German Military Government and, in the case of the police, the brutality. But, the individuals of the armed froces they met and ecountered in every day life were a notible exception.
With the present movement towards a union of European Nations it seems unlikely that the those who endured the wars and the new generations will ever again suffer war in the near future. The age old fear of eachother in Europe which has haunted the minds of Euopeans for centuries must fade away in the new alignments of the Europe of the future.
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Thanks for reading, and I hope I can take something from your comments
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Germany was an extraordinary nation from 1870 to 1945. German attitudes were not always the same because, naturally, temperaments varied in the different regions. There were the Prussians, aristocratic, militant, the North Germans, hard working and stubborn, the Rhinelanders, easy going and pleasure loving, and the Bavarians, good humoured and convivial. Nevertheless, in times of national crisis and war, they all supported a German point of view on the world around them (I believe the word is Weltanschaunng.)
Three times in less than a century, Germans made war on their European neighbours, ruining the stable conditions of nearly a dozen sovereign nations - in 1870, 1914 and 1939. Bismarck's dream of a German hegemony started an expansion beyond regional borders and carried on over into the ambitions of Kaiser Wilhelm and the class of 1914. Politicians ans soldiers alike joined in the patriotic anthem, Deutschland Uber Alles.
With the declaration of war in 1914, the British Foregin Secretary, Sir Edward Grey, uttered his prophetic words: "The lamps are going out all over Europe. We shall not see them lit again in our lifetime." The chaos inside Germany following 1918 led to the rise of Hitler and the take over of all German institutions by the Nazi Party. The ill-concieved Treaty of Versailles and Treaty of St. Germain had destroyed the the Austro-Hungarian Empire and left a vast area of central Europe ripe for conquest by a resurrected German Army. It was, frankly, a vacuum waiting to be filled. Hitler first imposed his regime on Austria by internal subversion, then marched into Czechoslovakia. To Hitler, international treaties were bits of paper to be torn up when he saw fit. In 1939, he was ready to invade Poland. The era of Blitzkreig had begun.
Ordinary Germans, hypnotised yet again by false promises of a glorious future, began the war believing in the cause of a Greater Germany and enjoying the first, easy victories. But on the battlefields of Russia and in the west they lost their innocence. Those who lived to see what happened later were overcome by grief.
This sentiment was echoed in a German song called Sag mir wo die Blumen sind. The words expressed nostalgia and heartache for the years of sacrifice. "Where have all the flowers gone? Long long ago the girls gave them to their young me. And where have the young me gone? Gone to be soldiers, every one. So tell me where the flowers the flowers are. They are growing on the soldiers' graves." It was the lament of a generation.
Looking back on the war, a question comes up again and again. How was it possible that so many people could be pressed into service to make war against the countires of Europe. Is there something in the history of the Germans going back to Attilla the Hun which accounts for their ambitions? Some commentators have noted that the Roman Empire stopped at the Rhine and consequently it's civilising influence did not reach the territories of the Barbarians.
A more likely explanation is the Germans, like the Dutch, the French and the British were in the forefront of Europe's industrial and commercial expansion of the nineteenth and early twentieth centuries. Rivalry in the search for raw material, markets, sphers of influence powered a relentless drive to achieve dominion and wealth and the Germans did not have a balanced political system to contain it. The great majority of people had to follow the lead of whoever was in power of the central government. Those unlucky enough to see what was happening and objected, "disappeared".
That the enigma of Germany lies in pessures from international politcs is what many people believe to be the reason for the eruptions of the past which culminated in the two world wars. Historical influences continuously shift from on national movement to another until suddenly circumstances arise when, like the opening of a strong room door by turning a code sequence in the lock, the counters click into place and war is inevitable.
The effect on people living in the areas of conflict leaves them with the imperitive of meeting the challenge in one way or another and seeking an adjustment to the situation. Take the people of the Channel Islands for example. When they think back to the occupation, their memories linger first on the harsh rules laid by the German Military Government and, in the case of the police, the brutality. But, the individuals of the armed froces they met and ecountered in every day life were a notible exception.
With the present movement towards a union of European Nations it seems unlikely that the those who endured the wars and the new generations will ever again suffer war in the near future. The age old fear of eachother in Europe which has haunted the minds of Euopeans for centuries must fade away in the new alignments of the Europe of the future.
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Thanks for reading, and I hope I can take something from your comments
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