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  • #1

    Just thought I'd get y'alls opinion

    I did this cartoon a coupla months back and meant to scan it and only just got round to it

    Just wanted to know wht you thought. It's about Luke Sipher, son of Satan and his roommate Lara.

    It's a 3-panel cartoon, same as Garfield, Dilbert, etc. There are 2 cartoons per page because killing trees is bad.
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    Salt it, burn it, get it the Hell away from me.
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    OK, whatever.
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    Wunderbar!
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    I'm far too busy playing with my banana to look.
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  • #2
    oops

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    • #3
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      • #4
        Of course I just HAD to get civ in
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            last one
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            • #7
              So? Does anyone think anything? Or am I having another episode and just posting pictures of naked fat people?

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              • #8
                Pretty good!
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                • #9
                  Ah! I get why he's called Luke Sipher! That's funny.

                  Seriously, apart from the last one (which is a tad weak), they're good. More!
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                  • #10
                    They're good
                    But you should try to put more effort in the drawings, even if that means a slower production. Especially the letters would deserve to be inked and standardised
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                    • #11
                      Pretty good stuff overall, jon.

                      Comments...

                      -- Some text lettering was hard to read.
                      -- should be "mortal plane" not "plain"
                      -- I'm assuming that female went catatonic after seeing the box o'corpses. Doesn't really translate well. (I'm sure that was tough to draw.)
                      -- Needs development so we get a better sense of Sipher's personality quirks.

                      Wouldn't mind seeing more...
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                      • #12
                        Agree with what Jrabbit said about the lettering and spelling.

                        A couple of them are weak, but then again every comic strip suffers from that - you can't hit the target every time. Generally speaking they were excellent and a couple made me laugh out loud.

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                        • #13
                          You should do more.
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                          • #14
                            More.
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                            • #15
                              nice RJ... although if you could, make the words more legible.
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