I Challenge You...

[Nubclear]

Originally posted by Albert Speer
Tassadar:

simple monosyllable rhymes and you repeated the same lines

Hey! At least mine has some effort!!!!! *Insert rant smiley here!*

It's your turn Speer, to do some real art. Hmm...Let's start off simple. Write me a six paged story, about anything of your liking. No double spacing. The only time I wish to see one big fat space is when your introducing a completly new idea (eg, the end of a chapter).

Che: ............
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Rap allows the bending of the pronouciation of words. *Insert cute smiley here*

[MichaeltheGreat]

Re: Re: I Challenge You...

Originally posted by Comrade Tassadar
Rap sucks mother****** ass
it just doesn't have enough bass (uhhuh)
yet it appeals to both lad and lass
cause its words are kinda crass (uhhuh)
mother******* listen to this 'diety'
and end up losing their identity (uhhuh)
cause they all are goin through puberty
and are forced to bend to the centrality (uhhuh)
Rap sucks mother****** ass
it just doesn't have enough bass (uhhuh)
yet it appeals to both lad and lass
cause its words are kinda crass (uhhuh)
and soon everyone will be part of the mass
sitting on their collective mother******* ass,
listening, to rappers sass.
(uhhuh)

Please don't lynch me because of these horribly contrived lyrics. it is hard to create art when your starting base is the antithesis of art. *Insert wink smiley here*

I hereby officially declare Tass to be the winner.

Although I like rap when I want something to put me in the mood to knock off a liquor store or take a baseball bat to someone to give him an attitude adjustment.

[MichaeltheGreat]

Originally posted by Immortal Wombat
albert speer has challenged us to rap
so i'm sitting at my keyboard an' i'm typin' out some crap
cos he says it aint that easy to produce lyrical rhymes
and that surely the effort is worth some minutes of our time(s)
im not that fond of rapping but i respec' those that can do it
or something along those lines. oops i think i mighta blew it
ah who the **** cares, not enough cussin' in this song
to be a real rapper you gotta ****ing **** that **** along
i'm comin' to the end now so with a bit of luck
i'll be able to finish this lyrical **** with a bitch ho nigga ****

And we have another winner!

[Al B. Sure!]

Comrade:

I'll have to go to work soon and i won't get off til after midnight but i'm off tomorrow and i'll get around to that for you. story about anything at all? it'll take more time than half a rap verse though so give me a little bit of time

(damn i kind of wish i saved my creative writing folder from all those English classes in high school though)

[Al B. Sure!]

MtG:

one they did not follow the criteria (what happened to those 5 rhyming syllables per line)... second, their verses could not hold a candle to Nas'

for someone as learned as you i honestly would've expected you of all people to have an open mind... you are a prejudiced man despite your intelligence

[Immortal Wombat]

so i rewind and begin again
won't make the same sorry sin again
make some multisyllabic rhymin' schemes
with a classic rap with classic crimin' themes
so i'm makin' up words who cares? not i
i'm rapping this pretty much on da fly
tryin' to keep the pace, run the race
so to make my rhymin' really ace
i hafta resort to stealin' from linkin park
still thinkin' fast
look! a radio mast!
lets blow that **** up



hmm, ok. so 12-16 syllables is somewhat different from what I usually write, which is 7-10 syllables usually. And this tails off towards the end, I somewhat lost a thread of where to go and say and whatever. Got me some alliteration in though, and I'd like to see Nas use "multisyllabic" in a rap.

[mrmitchell]

The ol' prejudiced line doesn't work on MtG.

[Al B. Sure!]

started out alright though i dont know about repeating "again" like that... rhyming schemes... crime in themes (how about that) was better but then you stopped multiple syllable rhyming after that...

[Al B. Sure!]

i missed the alliteration... where is it at?

[SlowwHand]

Let's cut to the chase. Rap sucks. End of story.

[David Floyd]

AS, here's an idea, why don't you post a political position that you have, and defend it using consistent logic. Have a basis for your position, and make it internally consistent.

[Nubclear]

Originally posted by Albert Speer
second, their verses could not hold a candle to Nas'

And I'm willing to bet your story won't hold a candle to glorious writers, such as Li Qi.

Not that Nas'(?) is even on the same level as Li Qi. There is a 100 difference between 0 and 100, but there is a 200 difference between -100 and 100.

Glory to China!

[Al B. Sure!]

damn David i'm already writing a story for Tassadar... this is getting too much work for me... especially since this thread is clearly not being seen with an open mind.

[David Floyd]

I think the point is that writing a good story or presenting a justified and internally consistent political/philosophical position requires more intelligence than finding 20 words that rhyme.

Could I do that? Theoretically, sure. Am I inclined to do so? Not really - it's not a true measure of intelligence any more than any of the other challenges here are (although the other challenges are more indicative of intelligence than rapping).

[Al B. Sure!]

Tassadar:

his name is Nasir shortened to Nas... that little punctuation ' is placed after people's names and before an additional 's' to signify ownership... when a name ends in 's' however or a noun is plural, we place the punctuation after the last 's'