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    Sitting in the Park (my anti-drug)

    The sun come out the dark & the clouds departing,
    Got a proud heart when I go 2 the crowded park &,
    I can't doubt the plant sprouts in our garden,
    Starting some unity in the community,
    Among U & me, roses growing out the street,
    Aint choking cause of weed, they open up 2 reach,
    The sun that shines the concrete, my mind want peace,
    Want 2 leave mom's *****ing cause I'm with them thugs,
    Who wishing & itching 2 be rich in dubs,
    With them kitchen drugs, I'm out, hearing a pidgeon cluck,
    My ears be in love with the sounds thats diverse,
    I rhyme a profound rap verse, birds chirp the refrain,
    While words blurt out the brain, searched 4 girls in vain,
    Til they heard my name, now ladies flirt with me,
    Maybe they heard of me when I gave concerts 4 free,
    Spitting love songs be getting a thug jawns.

    Like graffiti, U see me all in the blighty slum,
    Sitting on the bench all day like a bum,
    Getting drenched by rays of light from the sun,
    Mad since I peep the young with bones 4 sale,
    & a girl with a pony-tail who love 2 blush,
    Aint get in trouble much, playing double dutch,
    It pays 2 double a dutch with oregano,
    So they gain more, weedheads don't know what they paying 4,
    Fiend 2 be hazing more, boy asking me,
    4 crack & E, hash & weed, grass & trees,
    But not the park kind, he fiend to spark dimes,
    Hopes I'm selling but I tell him, "**** L's &,
    Trees, don't act like U need the weed, U need 2 breathe,
    Posters say make Mumia free but U seem 2 me,
    2 not realize that U be free,
    Open your eyes & see that U got better days past the haze.

    If U owe the trick ***** or U blow the brick fix,
    Need quick hits cause U know the big risk,
    Then don't creep, peep the Jahovah's Witness,
    With this pamphlet that say God planned ****,
    But the sinners I am with manage but damn this,
    World of buildings & concrete, the children want peace,
    Not roaches on the grass, boys know coke is quick cash,
    So they carry bags with girls playing Miss Mary Mack,
    In this air be rap, basslines from hoopties,
    Boy's minds be on thick cuties with big booties,
    All day & night, I peep a couple who play fight,
    But he aint dig her yet, an old nigga I met,
    Asks for a ciggarete, need liquor next,
    2 fix the stress, know he hit the edge,
    Drinking from a bag, talking about women he bagged,
    Breath stinking but he brag, I left him thinking back,
    In the past cause the future is hopeless,
    U lose your focus when U smoke roaches,
    & broke is what we learn 2 be,
    From here 2 eternity.


    Road Less Travelled

    U with college boys, good U getting knowledge cause,
    The hood be getting demolished with boys,
    Popping with glocks & ****, U need to drop with,
    The street logic 2 get boys 2 leave projects,
    But they believe they got **** in they pockets,
    Holding empty wallets hostage in they jeans,
    Got day dreams of creme off weight beams & they fiend,
    2 chill with cannibis 2 light, dealers slang this white,
    Heads fill the grams in pipes, I said damn this blight,
    Want the campus life, boys paying 4 crack & white,
    Saying U acting white, U need an apology,
    They don't know how crucial college be,
    You'll pull knowledge free from under them,
    Leave them wondering how 2 get dollars & whips,
    With a scholarship 2 Yale & Princeton,
    & not get dollars stripped in jail or prison,
    Remember 2 holler with a drop when U,
    The white collar scholar hit the block.

    In the projects, I'm rapping while U unravel,
    Knowledge like Adam who stole the apple,
    Took the road less travelled, now U run that,
    Come back & we'll have a Bar B Q, Black,
    See U back, feeling the beats, chilling with peeps,
    Still in the streets where the youth get arrested,
    Saw that girl U used to mess with, got news,
    She got tested positive 4 pregnancy,
    Your ex been free, opening her legs & she,
    Be sexing 4 free, she staying on the block,
    Saying U the pops, but no one believe her,
    Boys just leave her after they skeez her, her knees hurt,
    Getting down like she in church, but U don't love her still,
    Yo your brother deal, he a thug on the block,
    With E a dub a pop, he in love with glocks,
    Always holding them, U should start scolding him,
    Opening his mind 2 find the key 2 the door,
    Before he need more bail from prison,
    Tell males, come listen so they can go,
    2 Yale and Princeton.


    what you think?


    thanks
    "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
    "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

  • #2
    I'd have to hear it to a beat or something... I'm glad to see you were consistent and included cigarrettes and alcohol. I'd hate to see a hypocritical rant that didn't include those two.

    nice work
    To us, it is the BEAST.

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    • #3
      I like it

      but then... I'm a white country boy
      Monkey!!!

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      • #4
        I think anything that sends a strong anti-substance abuse message is good.
        To us, it is the BEAST.

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        • #5
          yeah I should record them... cant really judge them written out... the thing is that a lot of people can't judge lyrics when they hear them so typing them out is best if you want people to judge your lyrics


          thanks
          "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
          "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

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          • #6
            I like a lot of old-school rap (Tupac, Bone-Thugs, Ice-Cube, NWA, Snoop, etc). If you ever record and want some critiques, I'll be more than happy than to offer my opinions.
            To us, it is the BEAST.

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            • #7
              nah those aren't old school... they are better described as West Coast rap... my style is very east coast though.

              and I have recorded before and posted them on apolyton. I dont remember if you responded though
              "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
              "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

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              • #8
                *cough*
                "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
                "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

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                • #9
                  Re: Songs to be recorded

                  Originally posted by Albert Speer
                  Saw that girl U used to mess with, got news,
                  She got tested positive 4 pregnancy,
                  Your ex been free, opening her legs & she,
                  Be sexing 4 free, she staying on the block,
                  Saying U the pops, but no one believe her,
                  Boys just leave her after they skeez her, her knees hurt,
                  Getting down like she in church, but U don't love her still,


                  what you think?
                  I think I'd find it challenging to comment on that section without using the phrase "misogynistic bull****".
                  The genesis of the "evil Finn" concept- Evil, evil Finland

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                  • #10
                    misogynistic bull****...

                    in case you couldn't tell that song was a lyrical letter to someone... thats what became of his ex-girlfriend... misogynistic bull****... it's the ****ing truth
                    "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
                    "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

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                    • #11
                      She had sex with someone else? Well boo hoo. How unreasonable. Why didn't she do the decent thing and superglue her mimsy up in mourning?
                      The genesis of the "evil Finn" concept- Evil, evil Finland

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                      • #12
                        i am always extremely puzzled at why you always seem to take the woman's side, even in the hypothetical scenario presented by Speer.

                        It has nothing to do with antiquated notions of what a woman is supposed to be, and everything to do with respect for ones body, choices, and fidelity in relationships.

                        Why is it that whenever someone says scribes sings or ****s something that indicts a woman, Laz can be seen leaping to her aid, whether she is right or wrong, and accusing the author of misogyny?

                        Contrary to what you may think, women make mistakes too.
                        "Chegitz, still angry about the fall of the Soviet Union in 1991?
                        You provide no source. You PROVIDE NOTHING! And yet you want to destroy capitalism.. you criminal..." - Fez

                        "I was hoping for a Communist utopia that would last forever." - Imran Siddiqui

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                        • #13
                          Is having sex a mistake? Christ! I've been going wrong for years!
                          The genesis of the "evil Finn" concept- Evil, evil Finland

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                          • #14
                            this was not a hypothetical... the boy seriously went off to college and stopped hanging around the street and his ex-girlfriend started becoming a whore. she became pregnant and started saying that he was the father which he definently was not. they broke up in the summer and she didnt get pregnant until like january... i dont think she should be having sex with a whole lot of guys but my main problem was that she got pregnant and is saying he's the father...

                            how the hell you going to call me misogynist when clearly all I did was tell the facts.


                            thanks
                            "Flutie was better than Kelly, Elway, Esiason and Cunningham." - Ben Kenobi
                            "I have nothing against Wilson, but he's nowhere near the same calibre of QB as Flutie. Flutie threw for 5k+ yards in the CFL." -Ben Kenobi

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                            • #15
                              Hehe, sorry Speer, I happened to list only west-coast faves. Run-DMC is one of my all-time greats. I also love Beastie Boys (although I'm not sure they are considered mainstream rap). I used to listen to a lot of Def-Jam and RuffRyder rappers, but those were more recent. I was never a fan of Puffy or P.diddy or whatever he calls himself now. And I wasn't exposed to a lot of the more local east coast rap. After all, I'm just a dumbass white-bred, suburban kid.
                              To us, it is the BEAST.

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