The Fight For Freedom

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Thank you for your comments they are most appreciated

Sorry about the big war not happening Scratch.

It was hard work to write but enjoyable, I think I will take a short break from writing before starting out on another journey

You know I posted the final chapter over at CFC on the same day as here and as yet not one response

Dont think I will bother posting there again.

[Kaos XIII]

Originally posted by unscratchedfoot
No big war with the Romans.

Hmm, I also expected a big bloody battle, with Kyle in charge now.

Nonetheless, it's a good ending with the procession down the capital's streets and Kyle's words to the poeple.

I would love to read a sequel, (the deal with the Romans ). But maybe it's better left to the reader's imagination.

[Easthaven I]

Great job, Chrisius! :b Very glad you finished. And you sure have ended it with the same amount of quality and skill as the rest of the story. I hope I'll be able to do the same with mine sooner or later. The ending sure was not expected by me.

Very consistent writing, bro. I WILL be waiting for a sequel, I got too attached to the characters, plot, and CELTICA to leave it as just a memory now! Man, I gotta say, your strongest point was your character development. The reader really does get attached to Bryn.

Great work

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Thanks Kaos I appreciate your comments when are you going to write again for your fans ?

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Easthaven, thank you for your kind words, it was at times difficult to write and Im so glad that you can see what I was trying to achieve, especially with Bryn's character.

Although when I started researching etc for this story I had not intended it to be as deep, but events in real life sort of took over.

I lost my father who died of stomach cancer last january, and I think those emotions stem from my sense of grief. I was very close to "Fred" my Dad, we worked together for 20 years as partners, in the building trade. I think a lot of my Dad's qualities were in Bryn's character.

Regards Chris

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Well it seems this little beast has won the contest, thanks very much to everyone who has expressed their support and given advice at times throughout the course of writing this one.

Im taking a break from writing myself but do continue to enjoy all the stories here, I love this forum

Once again thanks to all for reading

[vovan]

This baby deserves a hearty bump.

[PLATO]

Originally posted by vovan
This baby deserves a hearty bump.

Indeed!


...and a sequel too!

[Paddy]

Originally posted by vovan
This baby deserves a hearty bump.

Indeed, and to be read again

Thanks Chris