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    Private Charlie McBain, US Marine Corps, sighed as he looked out across the endless expanse of snow and forest for the thousandth time that morning. It didn't matter where you were in this damned wasteland, it always looked the same. Patrol duty here was almost a form of torture, especially picket duty where there was nothing warm anywhere near the patrol route.

    He shivered slightly. There was nowhere in the United States that could even vaguely be described as 'warm', but here, in the northern extremes of the country the cold was mind-numbing. He slung his Aztec-made assault rifle over his shoulder and slipped his hands into his armpits for warmth.

    He trudged on down the path through the snow for a few more minutes before he saw another uniformed figure walking quickly in the opposite direction. As they got closer he could see it was his friend Corporal Anthony.

    "Hey Corporal," he said through chattering teeth, "cold innit?"

    "Cold? Cold??" Antony replied with a grin, "Charlie, this is just a nice bracing breeze."

    "Damned Eskimos." Charlie muttered loudly.

    "I heard that." Anthony said mock-reprovingly, "Inuit, Private, Inuit. How many times do I have to tell you that?"

    "Yeah, yeah."

    Corporal Anthony, quite clearly, was an Inuit, who were the only ethnic group that really lived up in the northern states. They'd been defeated by the Americans thousands of years before, but as the only thing the U.S. government cared about up here was oil, neither the Americans nor the Inuit had much reason for enmity.

    "Seen anything?" Anthony asked, more seriously.

    "Not a blessed thing. I don't think anything in it's right mind except a polar bear or a reindeer would want to come up here."

    Anthony shrugged.

    "See you at the mess room after we finish patrol duty." he said.

    "Right."

    The two of them carried on their seperate patrol paths and Charlie's thoughts slipped back to the all-pervading cold. It had been no end of trouble when they were setting up the facility, causing fuel to freze in vehicle engines, steel rods to shatter like glass, and causing incredible discomfort to everyone who worked there. Many of those assigned from the southern states had grumbled about having to set this place up in what was best described by the common joke up here:

    "What's the difference between here and a freezer?"

    "A freezer's a lot smaller."

    Still, the order for this base had come from President Lincoln himself in Washington, and you didn't question orders from Washington. Doing so tended to cause bullets to appear in one's head.

    He was jolted out of such thoughts when his radio began beeping with the 'Report In' signal, broadcast every ten minutes. He tapped three buttons on his helmet in the correct order and the bleeping ceased. He then glanced around agin at the landscape. He shook his head again, seeing nothing, but just as he did so he spotted movement in the trees. Immediately after that he heard the slight crunching of snow.

    Forgetting the cold, he brought his assault rifle up and squinted between the trees, trying to see what was there. He saw another flicker of movement on the other side of the path, and spinning to face it, he caught the slight, unmistakeable glint of the weak sunlight on a gunbarrel.

    He knew full well that no-one would be stupid enough to try and pull this kind of thing as a practical joke on him, and guards at this facility were ordered to shoot intruders on sight - assuming they couldn't be captured. He raised his rifle and squeezed the trigger.

    Nothing happened. Charlie swore - the cold must have jammed the gun, yet again. He frantically worked the system fitted to the guns of everyone assigned here for just this purpose - but just as his finger went for the trigger once again, he heard the muffled sound of a silenced gunshot, and suddenly felt a bullet strike him in the back of the head. It was the last thing he ever felt.

    * * *

    I'm working on the next bit right now. Any comments would be appreciated .
    Last edited by GeneralTacticus; June 10, 2002, 23:04.

  • #2
    Great Work! You are keeping it simple in the begining with a little twist. Good read can't wait to see where you are going with this.

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    • #3
      The Russians are invading! With the Canadaians! And the first thing they're trying to do is get the US in an unpopular war with the eskimos!

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      • #4
        Go Eskimos!! KIll everyone!!!!! Give the Eskimos nukes and THEN let the story get rollin' !!!

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        • #5
          I can't help, it, General Tacitus...but I love it already. Continue this one, please.

          Never can trust them Eskimoes. They are always up to somethin'!
          Empire growing,
          Pleasures flowing,
          Fortune smiles and so should you.

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          • #6
            I like it write more!
            To us, it is the BEAST.

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            • #7
              Yay a cold story for the HOT HOT summer
              First Master, Banan-Abbot of the Nana-stary, and Arch-Nan of the Order of the Sacred Banana.
              Marathon, the reason my friends and I have been playing the same hotseat game since 2006...

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              • #8
                Great story. Definitely keep going.
                "Corporation, n, An ingenious device for obtaining individual profit without individual responsibility." -- Ambrose Bierce
                "Any society that would give up a little liberty to gain a little security will deserve neither and lose both." -- Benjamin Franklin
                "Yes, we did produce a near-perfect republic. But will they keep it? Or will they, in the enjoyment of plenty, lose the memory of freedom? Material abundance without character is the path of destruction." -- Thomas Jefferson

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                • #9
                  Right. I'm at school currently, but I'll carry on when I get home.

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                  • #10
                    Colonel Julius Gnaeus Pompey felt deep disgust as he lowered his silenced weapon, a Pilum-III automatic rifle. Although he had no compunction against killing, like every other member of the Primus Legio Romanis (First Roman Legion), or PLR, the Roman Special Forces, this had come about as result of incompetence... and it threatened to compromise their mission.

                    He cursed again as another sentry came down the same pass a few seconds later and saw the body. That one died just as he reached for his radio.

                    "Lieutenant Marcus," Julius growled into his microphone, "how many times must you be told never to do that? If an enemy picket shows up, hide, or if you're spotted, shoot."

                    "Sorry, sir." Marcus replied. Julius just sighed with irritation waved for the others to follow him. As they did so he kept speaking.

                    "Now, according to the intel we have on this facility all pickets are checked by radio every ten minutes. It seems that this one just received his, which gives a bit of time. However, once the signal rolls around again, the alarm will be raised."

                    The others all nodded soberly. He went on.

                    "This means that we must move to a strategy of maximum force. The time for stealth is over."

                    * * *

                    In the security control room for the facility, Officer Walker was getting very tired. Tired and bored. He'd been stimulating himself with coffee for most of his shift, but it wasn't being very effective any more.

                    His job was to monitor all of the security systems, especially the cameras, but nothing ever seemed to happen. He'd been on the job for almoist eight hours, and in a few minutes his shift would be over and he could get some sleep. He watched the digital clock tick over to 8:00 AM and smiled. As he stood up he saw the RI signal going out again and decided to stay and see if anything went wrong. As it happened, it did. Two sentries failed to report in during the 15 second window period. Regulation called for a full-scale alarm.

                    He triggered it.

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                    • #11
                      When the alarm the alarm went off Julius and his team had already reached a clump of trees near the electrified perimeter fence. Julius was fiddling with a small radio trnasmitter. He switched it on. A few seconds later it gave a small beep and a voice came through.

                      "234648" Julius said swiftly repeating a pre-arranged code.

                      "Gotcha." a voice at the other end replied, "hang on a minute."

                      "It's done," the voice went on, "the power should start shorting out right now."

                      Even as he said that all the lights in the camp simaltaneously went out. They came back on again briefly then cut out. Julius and the others then sprinted across to electric fence. Marcus pulled out some high explosives and clamped each one, armed, to the fence wires. They would go off as soon as the power returned. Everyone then ran for their lives.

                      The bombs detonated about ten seconds later, ripping out an entire length of the fence and blowing a huge hole in it.

                      * * *

                      The faceless figure from the other end of the radio broke a small smile of contempt as he saw the pandemonium throughout the base, hears the blaring sirens. The Americans had been too arrogant for far too long, and they would pay dearly. This was just the beginning...

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                      • #12
                        EXCELLENT STORY I hope the faceless figure is the only gay eskimo

                        Tenacious D is the shizznittle bam Schnipp Schnapp snappa
                        First Master, Banan-Abbot of the Nana-stary, and Arch-Nan of the Order of the Sacred Banana.
                        Marathon, the reason my friends and I have been playing the same hotseat game since 2006...

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                        • #13
                          More More More More More!!!! I love it already. Please write more! And for the record, I take back everything I say if you beat me in the story contest for Round 9 .
                          "The first man who, having fenced off a plot of land, thought of saying, 'This is mine' and found people simple enough to believe him was the real founder of civil society. How many crimes, wars, murders, how many miseries and horrors might the human race had been spared by the one who, upon pulling up the stakes or filling in the ditch, had shouted to his fellow men: 'Beware of listening to this imposter; you are lost if you forget the fruits of the earth belong to all and that the earth belongs to no one." - Jean-Jacques Rousseau

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                          • #14
                            After the heat of the explosion died down the twelve Roman commandos sprinted back toward the fence and through the gap. There was little organized resistance, as no-one in the facility actually knew what was happening. Several of the sentries were running around aimlessly nearby, frantically trying to figure out what was happening. The Romans shot them all without a second thought.

                            As they entered the grounds of the facility Julius was trying to remember the map that they had been provided with. The entrance to the area of the facility they needed to access was near the end of the main road into the base, but he couldn't see it...

                            'There.' He thought, as he spotted it. He turned to two other members of his unit.

                            "Seargents Decimus and Tullia, we need a diversion while we break into the base. I want you to use grenade launchers to blow up the fuel depot over there. That should keep them hopping long enough for us to get in. Join us as soon as you can."

                            "Yes, sir, right away." Tullia replied, and both she and Decimus sprinted away, heading for the fuel tanks while keeping close to the building walls. They both pulled out their grenade launchers as they ran.

                            It didn't take them long to get in range. When they did they each fired three well-aimed shots, the rockets boosters fitted to each grenade flaring into life as they left the barrel.

                            When the barrage struck the tanks and detonated, the result was nothing short of spectacular. Four of the grenades all struck the same tank, which exploded in a searing fireball and ignited the other tanks around it. The whole area went up in a gigantic firestorm, which ignited numerous other things nearby as well.

                            The two Roman soldiers grinned at each other; they had done their job even better than they had expected. This would have to be the diversion of the century. Before either of them could speak, though, another huge blast rocked the base. Their heads snapped round to see that the initial blast of the fuel tanks had shattered the wall to an armoury of some sort, Which was now also exploding. Even as they watched, more detonations ripped through it, most likely deafening anyone nearby. they two of them grinned again before running off to rejoin their unit.

                            While the two other commandos had been creating a diversion, the rest of the team had not been idle. They had shot two more of the sentries and reached their entrance without difficulty.

                            Julius pressed the 'open' switch next to the door and smiled as it wooshed open without asking for verification. Their contact had done his work well; the security systems were all offline as well.

                            As he and the other nine soldiers sprinted inside, Julius checked the immediate vicinity. There were no guards; they were in what looked like a large hangar and loading bay, presumably for supply delivery to this base. This impression was confirmed upon a more careful inspection by the presence of a pair of supply helicopters and several forklifts, along with a large side door marked 'storage'.

                            Several of the other troops pulled out explosives and started toward the choppers and forklifts. One of them gave a questioning look to Julius. Julius nodded.

                            "Yes, set the explosives, but set them on a five minute time fuse. We don't want to attract too much attention to our entry here yet."

                            The explosives were quickly set and armed, and the whole unit moved toward the door marked 'storage'. There was a lever next to it which raised it quite quickly, and they stepped into the room on the other side. As they did so Decimus and Tullius ran in through the door to the loading bay.

                            "Hurry up and get over here," Julius said over the radio, "the choppers and forklifts are set to blow in a few minutes."

                            The two of them sprinted across the bay even faster and arrived with the rest of them in under 30 seconds, out of breath. They stood panting for a few seconds before they recovered and they all began looking through the storage area.

                            It was stacked floor to ceiling with crates marked 'supplies', with more detailed labels underneath. Julius turned up the magnification in his helmet visor to get a better look and recorded it all on the camera built into it:

                            Supplies

                            Handle with care

                            Electronics

                            Shipment desig. 4826


                            Supplies

                            Machine Tools

                            Shipment desig. 2560


                            Supplies

                            Handle with care

                            Radiation shields

                            Shipment desig. 992

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