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  • Russian Rulette

    Sucked and since couldnt delete thread Ill delete post.
    Last edited by Grandpa Troll; August 13, 2005, 23:58.
    Hi, I'm RAH and I'm a Benaholic.-rah

  • #2
    Just posting to say that I'm reading.
    I have no opinion on this yet, just a few comments/questions:

    Rulette
    ... Did you mean "Roulette" or was the mispelling intentional... IE: were you planning on making a pun?

    And this seems more like a Prologue setting the stage rather than the action actually happening. It reads like a history rather than a story right now.

    In the meantime, Czar Trollnika IV will make sweeping changes in the labor reform. Soon the world will know why we are producing a machine to lift Mother Russia upon high.
    "producing a machine"... I'm not quite certain what this means... sorry.
    -->Visit CGN!
    -->"Production! More Production! Production creates Wealth! Production creates more Jobs!"-Wendell Willkie -1944

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    • #3
      You are correct

      confusion of mish mash of unrelated words too complicated to fathom

      scrapped
      Last edited by Grandpa Troll; August 14, 2005, 00:00.
      Hi, I'm RAH and I'm a Benaholic.-rah

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      • #4
        Okay- thank you for the explanation!

        I still think that perhaps more should be explained about the term 'producing a machine' in the story itself- but at least I understand what you meant now!
        -->Visit CGN!
        -->"Production! More Production! Production creates Wealth! Production creates more Jobs!"-Wendell Willkie -1944

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        • #5
          P.O.S.

          Last edited by Grandpa Troll; August 14, 2005, 00:01.
          Hi, I'm RAH and I'm a Benaholic.-rah

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          • #6
            Gurka 17, People of the Valley
            I am of the Horde.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Paddy the Scot
              Hi, I'm RAH and I'm a Benaholic.-rah

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