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Just posting to say that I'm reading.
I have no opinion on this yet, just a few comments/questions:
... Did you mean "Roulette" or was the mispelling intentional... IE: were you planning on making a pun?Rulette
And this seems more like a Prologue setting the stage rather than the action actually happening. It reads like a history rather than a story right now.
"producing a machine"... I'm not quite certain what this means... sorry.In the meantime, Czar Trollnika IV will make sweeping changes in the labor reform. Soon the world will know why we are producing a machine to lift Mother Russia upon high.-->Visit CGN!
-->"Production! More Production! Production creates Wealth! Production creates more Jobs!"-Wendell Willkie -1944 -
You are correct
confusion of mish mash of unrelated words too complicated to fathom
scrapped 
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Okay- thank you for the explanation!
I still think that perhaps more should be explained about the term 'producing a machine' in the story itself- but at least I understand what you meant now!-->Visit CGN!
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Originally posted by Paddy the Scot
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