The Empire of Talianna

[Mad Bomber]

Nylan:

I just wanted to add a bit of advice. The readers in the story section tend to get a bit rowdy when they don't get their story fix.

Don't give in to the temptation to post something just to get the story over with. If you are not satisfied with the product you create then I doubt that others will be either. Take your time, and create something that you enjoy and your writing will improve a great deal. In the long run, readers will appreciate this approach.

Of course this is just my $.02, take it for what its worth.

[Nylan-Nolan]

OK. I gotcha. SHoud have a redo of Chap. VII and some more chapters soon.

"If you ask someone a penny for their thoughts, and they give you their $.02, where does the other penny go?"

[Mad Bomber]

Originally posted by Nylan-Nolan
"If you ask someone a penny for their thoughts, and they give you their $.02, where does the other penny go?"

Just think of it as a bonus (buy one, get one free)

[Nylan-Nolan]

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Iv'e gotta penny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Paddy]

Originally posted by Mad Bomber
Nylan:

I just wanted to add a bit of advice. The readers in the story section tend to get a bit rowdy when they don't get their story fix.

Don't give in to the temptation to post something just to get the story over with. If you are not satisfied with the product you create then I doubt that others will be either. Take your time, and create something that you enjoy and your writing will improve a great deal. In the long run, readers will appreciate this approach.

Of course this is just my $.02, take it for what its worth.

well said Mad Bomber well said

[Nylan-Nolan]

I should have a rewrite soon

[Mad Bomber]

Originally posted by Nylan-Nolan
I should have a rewrite soon

Can we get an update on a rewrite, Nylan? I hate to prod but it has been a few weeks now.

If you have changed you mind on the rewrite then just let us know, its awful hard to be patient when a story with this potential sits idle.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Here here, I second that