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  • #16
    Chapter IV: The War Begins

    Shadimar looked out upon the trap he had set up as he rode toward his command post. His men were positioned in dikes that were just barely over the crest of the hills that made up most of the valley that the Mongols had just entered. He had sent a raiding party to attack the horde while it was on the move. The Mongols, of course, pursued. The plan was to get them to rush over the hillcrests and fall upon the pikes set up just out of sight. After that, the archers would let fire from the adjacent hilltops while Talion Cavalry came around and charge the barbarians from behind. So, far everything was going fine. “So far”, the king thought as he nudged his mount towards the Memkar Cavalry division. He could only hope that his men would do as ordered. He wanted a quick war with few casualties, not an honorable war in which he would be killed and Talianna would fall to the Mongol Horde. He could only hope…

    Colby waited impatiently. He felt uncomfortable in his chain mail and helmet, especially in the blistering heat of midday in the Fertile Crescent. He could see the Euphrates River about a mile to the west, and he envied the pikemen stationed near it. Ever since the war began and he had become a pikeman in the Kings Army, he had wished he had never been enrolled in the Acadamy. For the last eighteen months, there had been nothing but war for Colby. War with the Mongols, war with the Persians, war with rebels, it didn’t matter who he was fighting with as long as there were men to kill. Each death made him sick to the stomach, and the only reason he slept after a battle was purely exhaustion. Why Shadimar decided to fight three wars at once, he did not know, but he had faith in his Commander, and in his King.

    Over the course of the last eighteen months, much had happened. Shortly after the discovery of gunpowder, the Persians and the Mongols took the only two sources of saltpeter in the Kingdom. Because of this, the King decided to use any means necessary to not only recover the stolen resources, but to bring Persia and Mongolia under Talion rule. So far, only one battle had been lost, and that was because of an ambush. Not all was looking well, though. Unhappy landholders who protested the war had convinced some “bandits” to revolt against Kingdom rule. The rebellion, which mainly took place in the African Provinces, was put down swiftly, though it was costly. Because Africa was far from the frontlines, Shadimar was reluctant to spare troops for the six months it would take to stop the rebellion. After the rebel force was crushed, all the traitors were hung, and not one peasant dared to defy the Sovereignty of Shadimar Illidrad, King and Protector of The Kingdom of Talianna.

    Back in the Fertile Crescent, the battle had gone well. The Mongolians had fallen into the trap and now twenty score Mongols were spitted on pikes, turned into pincushions, or obliterated by the Talion Cavalry. An added bonus was that the horse archers were the first to fall on the pikes, as they had moved to the front of the horde to shoot at the raiders. Shadimar smiled grimly as he turned to Knight-General Jevin. “Well,” he said while he cleaned his blade, “that’s one less group of bloodthirsty savages. Now all we have to do is route out the Persian dogs, and we will be ready to take the war to foreign fronts.”
    If I only had a brain...

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    • #17
      Chapter V: Persopolis

      Cirion tapped his foot nervously while he waited in the antechamber to the throne room of Consul Xerxies, Imperator and Princeps of Persia. He was here to offer a stolen technology that might aid the battle against the evil Empire of Talianna. Cirion was no fool. Despite Xerxies promises that Persia was winning the war, he had no doubt that was all that they were, promises. Shadimar had routed the Mongol horde and the Imperial Army without losing a single battle. The only battle Talianna had lost to anyone was an ambush by rebels in Africa. The King of Talianna had been forced to fight three wars, and he was winning all of them. Cirion was here to make sure that if the war had to be fought on Persian soil, it would be at the cost of many Talion lives.

      A servant wearing the purple of the royal household entered from a side door and indicated that he should enter the throne room. It was a very nervous Cirion that complied, after picking up his many scrolls. The servant offered to help, so he dumped all the scrolls in his arms and they entered the royal throne room of Xerxies, the most powerful man in Persia. What the little man from the west saw was breathtaking. White marble stone glistened in the morning light that came from the windows adjacent the throne. Windows that seemed to rise up forever, even past the roof, which seemed far to high for any man to have painted the murals of the Talion/Persian crusades into Europe. The walls were blue marble with gold veins, as well as white stars dotting the “sky” that was the throne room. The throne itself was made of silver, and had velvet cushions. Upon it sat Xerxies. With his gold scepter and jewel embedded crown, he looked like the richest man in the world, and he was.

      “Well, what do you have to say?” inquired the Imperial Speaker for the Consul. Cirion paused. He had been so enraptured in the beauty of the throne room that he forgot why he was here. “Oh…my lord, I apologize. I was just admiring your throne room. Um, let’s see here…oh yes, I have found something that may aid the Persian war effort against the evil Talions.”

      “Stole, you mean.” Xerxies replied as he brushed an imaginary speck of dust off his robe. “Well, whatever it is, you had better tell me now, before I decide that I don’t like you.” He indicated to the arrow slits in the wall that were located nearest ho him. Cirion had not seen these before. They were flickering, and the little man concluded that the archers manning those posts had fire arrows. He decided to get on with his demonstration as quickly as possible and leave.

      “Well, your highness,” he began, “I have here the instructions for making gunpowder, as well as detailed blueprints for long range muskets.”

      “Nice, very nice. Maybe I won’t have my Imperial guard turn you into a charred pincushion.” He signaled to the archers again, and the glowing faded. “Tell me,” he said, “does anyone suspect you of stealing the instructions?”

      “No, my lord, I even made copies to put where the originals were. Nobody suspects anything.”

      “Servant,” Xerxies turned his head towards the servant who held the scrolls. “Take those scrolls to High Priest Constance. He will know what to do with them. As for you,” he redirected his attention to Cirion, “What do you wish in return for your efforts?”

      “Nothing my lord.” The westerner replied. “I only wish the safety of Imperial lands.”

      “Bah!” the Consul replied, “That’s a lie. What do you really want?” Cirion looked at Xerxies youngest daughter, who had just entered the chamber, unable to speak. “Ah, you seek a wife. Very well, she is yours. Take care of her.” Was all Xerxies said before indicating that princess Jasmine and Cirion should exit the room. When they paused, the Imperial speaker took up the conversation.

      “His majesty is very busy. Out with the both of you!” The archers raised their fire bows again and the soon to be wed couple exited via the main doors and headed towards the gardens. They really needed to talk.
      If I only had a brain...

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      • #18
        That last lines a killer

        My wife and I really need to talk

        This is good stuff Nylan please keep it coming
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        • #19
          Chapter Five: Young Love

          Jasmine and Cirion grew up together. They had known each other practically since birth, though they seldom talked during their childhood. Many would not see this as possible because of the differences in social class. Jasmine was the youngest daughter of the Consul of Persia, and Cirion was the second class son of a servant. Despite the odds of these two knowing each other at all, they were very close. As it turns out, Cirion’s father was a servant in the summer home of the Consul’s daughters. This home was, of course in the East. Jasmine had taken a fancy to the shy little servant’s boy that seemed to blush every time she saw him helping his father. After a year or so of this odd relationship, Jasmine decided to do something.

          She began sneaking out to see him. At first, this caught Cirion by surprise. Never had he expected the girl of his dreams, the most beautiful thing he had ever laid eyes on, to fancy him. “Wha…your highness! What are you doing here?” he asked when he saw Jasmine outside his window

          .“Shh.” She replied as she climbed through. “I’ve decided I like you, and that we might as well get to know each other. You’re cute, you know that. After a year of blushing and stuttering, I was wondering when you were going to break the ice.”

          “But your highness…won’t your father be angry? It’s not proper for first class citizens like yourself to mingle with the common folk.”

          “My father won’t know.” Replied the Princess as she sat down on his cot. “He’s all the way in Persopolis fretting over the French.” Cirion began to say something, but discovered that he couldn’t speak when someone was kissing him. His first impulse was to pull away from her, but when he looked at her, he felt something unfamiliar to him. He felt something that a peasant rarely felt. He felt love. He had always liked her, and he had thought he had loved her, the girl of his dreams, but reality was infinitely different. This was true love. It was love at first sight, or rather, in this case, love at first communication. They embraced, two people who hardly knew each other, but they felt as if they had been friends forever.

          They would have been up all night, talking, embracing, and getting to know each other, if it weren’t for two things. The first was that Cirion’s father was still awake. This fact is self explanatory. The second reason that they could not be together all night was that someone would have noticed. A servant and a Princess who were both exhausted from lack of sleep would be bound to be noticed. For the next few years, Jasmine and Cirion visited each other for an hour or so every night. Each night, they grew closer. By the time the European Crusades, they were finishing each other’s sentences.

          Now, you would have thought that a love so profound would have led to more physical contact than just kissing and embracing. This was not so. Both of them knew that should Jasmine become pregnant, their relationship would be over, and Cirion would be executed. So, with great reluctance, they decided on one of their first meetings that they would not take that risk. It was hard at times, but they stuck to their promise.

          When the European wars were over, Xerxies decided to call his daughters back to Persopolis. The danger was over; his children no longer would run the risk of assassination or worse fates that French Secret Service could inflict upon them in the Capitol. The last night before Jasmine and her two older sisters left for Persopolis, was a sad night. Cirion was hard pressed to leave Jasmine’s chambers before dawn. “I love you so much,…please don’t leave.”

          “I…I don’t want to, but you and I both know that I have to.” She sobbed and cried into his shoulder.

          “I will come for you. We can run away to Talianna and get married there.”

          “You know we couldn’t do that. Father would coerce the Talions into searching for me.”

          “Well then I must find another way to reunite us…I will find a way.” Just then, they heard the maid coming down the hall.

          “You need to go, my love.” They embraced one last time before Cirion climbed down off the royal balcony and headed home. He did not move his eyes from her slim figure until the foliage in the garden hid her from view.

          On the way home, he got an idea. It was a crazy one, but it just might work. And so, with only the clothes on his back, his father’s horse in his hands, and love in his heart, he headed west to Talianna.
          If I only had a brain...

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          • #20
            Not bad at all Nylan.

            Very good.
            Read Blessed be the Peacemakers | Read Political Freedom | Read Pax Germania: A Story of Redemption | Read Unrelated Matters | Read Stains of Blood and Ash | Read Ripper: A Glimpse into the Life of Gen. Jack Sterling | Read Deutschland Erwachte! | Read The Best Friend | Read A Mothers Day Poem | Read Deliver us From Evil | Read The Promised Land

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            • #21
              I'm getting better!
              If I only had a brain...

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              • #22
                It's so sad, the Princess just doesn't want to give up the goods!
                * A true libertarian is an anarchist in denial.
                * If brute force isn't working you are not using enough.
                * The difference between Genius and stupidity is that Genius has a limit.
                * There are Lies, Damned Lies, and The Republican Party.

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                • #23
                  good stuff
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                  • #24
                    Thanx guys,
                    Hope to have an update soon!
                    If I only had a brain...

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                    • #25
                      Thanks Nylan

                      Very enjoyable
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                      I am of the Horde.

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                      • #26
                        Originally posted by Mad Bomber
                        It's so sad, the Princess just doesn't want to give up the goods!
                        *Falls over laughing*

                        If I only had a brain...

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                        • #27
                          Okay, here's an ending. Let me know if you think it needs some revising.

                          Chapter VII: Betrayal

                          Shadimar was in the command tent studying maps he already knew by heart when a messenger from the Palace entered. He was ashen-faced, exhausted, and there was a sickly look about him. Shadimar recognized him as the head librarian at the Great Library of Talianna. “Yes, Gaiyrn? What is it?” When the man paused, he grew worried. “Well?” he prodded.

                          “Sir,” he replied. He was panting. “Grave news. Our original gun designs and gunpowder recipe have been stolen!”

                          “What!?!” the King exclaimed. “Who stole those documents!?! I must know! Who has betrayed us?”

                          “Well sir,” the librarian said, “We don’t know who he is, but we know who sent him.”

                          “Tell me! I must know!”

                          “Well sir, the copies left where the originals were happened to be on Persian paper. Whoever stole the scrolls practically left a note saying who sent him.”

                          “How could I be so blind?” Shadimar was furious now. All his careful planning, his hard work, wasted. Now that the Persians had muskets, he would have to rework all of his strategies. He sighed. “Inform my officers, and then go to the mess tent. You look hungry…and tired. I will arrange for you to sleep with the servants tonight. In the morning I will provide you with a fresh horse and supplies for the journey home. When this war is over, remind me to give you a pay raise.”

                          “Thank you, Highness. Thank you ever so much.” Gaiyrn bowed as he exited the tent and headed to the mess tent for a well deserved dinner.
                          * * *
                          A week later, Xerxies was talking to a messenger from Talianna. This was no ordinary foreign affairs matter. No, this was much worse. This was an accusation of theft and treachery. “I knew that Cirion was an idiot and a traitor the minute I laid eyes on him.” He said to himself after speaking with the messenger. He turned to one of his guards. “Captain!”

                          “Yes, my lord?”

                          “Arrest Cirion. He must be executed at once!”

                          “Yes, my lord!” The guard scuttled out the doors and headed to Cirion and Jasmine’s estate.

                          The next morning, Cirion was hung. Despite Jasmine’s begging to let him live, Xerxies killed his beloved daughter’s only love. Later, she was discovered lying on her bed with a slit in her neck, a bowl full of blood on the floor, and a jeweled knife in her hand. Upon learning that he had caused the death of his own daughter, Xerxies locked himself in his private chambers and refused to come out. Many people said that he went insane and killed himself. Without the guidance of their leader, the government collapsed, and Persia erupted into chaos. Talion troops moved in quickly and took Persopolis without a fight. The theft of gunpowder had destroyed one of the greatest nations on earth.
                          If I only had a brain...

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                          • #28
                            Not bad, but a bit abrupt and it has a bit too much romeo-and-juliet for my taste.


                            However, the overall tale was pretty good, you started off on a strong note Nylan.
                            * A true libertarian is an anarchist in denial.
                            * If brute force isn't working you are not using enough.
                            * The difference between Genius and stupidity is that Genius has a limit.
                            * There are Lies, Damned Lies, and The Republican Party.

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                            • #29
                              Too abrupt Nylan, it spoils what was thus far a good story.

                              You should rethink this a little and try to add some more by editing your last post. Maybe even an extra chapter ?

                              Otherwise what else can I say, I enjoyed the story very much but honestly feel you rushed there at the end. Thank you for posting this and I look forward to seeing more work by you in fiture
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                              • #30
                                I thought so too, but I was running out of ideas. I'll fix it as soon as I can. This bayby ain't over yet!
                                If I only had a brain...

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