Well, that is one voluminous document from mark here, and one from Mis in my mailbox. Looks like it will be a very long first post in the vote thread.
A couple of comments for mark: That is a very good summary of your arguments, but the format is not entirely what I had in mind. It does not include a rules text (though I guess there are only so many ways to say 'Demanding withdrawal via the commlink menu is not allowed' ), the style is a bit personal, and you were supposed to make a short list of arguments against the other two alternatives. For the sake of consistency, I would appreciate it if you could rewrite it a bit, cut some of the prose and make the entire argument in the list of advantages. For example,
can essentially be shortened to 'Does not assume that the attacker is willing to withdraw.' The other paragraphs are somewhat more involved and need to be longer, but you get the idea. I could do the editing if you prefer, but then I might cut parts you consider to be crucial..
Anyway, thanks to both of you for helping out here, and I hope I will receive a text from Oniron as well.
A couple of comments for mark: That is a very good summary of your arguments, but the format is not entirely what I had in mind. It does not include a rules text (though I guess there are only so many ways to say 'Demanding withdrawal via the commlink menu is not allowed' ), the style is a bit personal, and you were supposed to make a short list of arguments against the other two alternatives. For the sake of consistency, I would appreciate it if you could rewrite it a bit, cut some of the prose and make the entire argument in the list of advantages. For example,
quote: In my mind, the 'demand withdrawal' option can only be applied where both parties are willing - and we are sure that both parties are willing. If a hostile unit enters someone else's territory, there will, of course, be diplomatic repercussions. As I have earlier mentioned, the 'demand withdrawal' option can only be applied where the treaty is fully active, and both parties are willing. The defender, at this point, does not know this - and as such the option cannot be applied. |
can essentially be shortened to 'Does not assume that the attacker is willing to withdraw.' The other paragraphs are somewhat more involved and need to be longer, but you get the idea. I could do the editing if you prefer, but then I might cut parts you consider to be crucial..
Anyway, thanks to both of you for helping out here, and I hope I will receive a text from Oniron as well.
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