Hive IC story - Discussion

[Kody]

Well just remember what you're doing may put ideas into the drone's head. They haven't 100% commited so you have to be careful about what you say.

I felt that a pre-unity story would be more netural ground.

[Snowflake]

On the topic of copy it over, I suppose we don't need to copy the ones that happened in Hive? For example Marshal's killing Jamski's spy. Anyway, please copy your first post to CGN if you could Marshal. Oh, and maybe you want to start an IC story (on Chiron) discussion thread too and perhaps write a introduction post there. Quite a lot work, isn't it?

[Snowflake]

Originally posted by Kody
Well just remember what you're doing may put ideas into the drone's head. They haven't 100% commited so you have to be careful about what you say.

I agree. We have to be careful not to do anything that might aggrevate Drones. I suppose there's nothing wrong if we only write good things about them? Even if we split up later, nice words will never hurt.

[Vev]

I hope the Drones will take kindly to an assassination of their base governor.

[Snowflake]

I wrote this last piece last Friday but didn't get to post it since Poly was down. So I'm posting it now, and I don't mean to distract us from the more important works.

[Snowflake]

Comrade Vev, please add your murder scene soon if possible for Comrade HongHu was planning to go back to the Hive pretty soon.

[Snowflake]

A hint to interested parties: It was the bear who took the pink brush.

[Vev]

I'm getting there, it takes time for me to integrate and something something that fits in.

[Snowflake]

Take your time. We are not running anywhere. There must be something something that fits in.

[Snowflake]

what is a Pilate?

[Vev]

It is a form of exercise that strengthens and conditions muscles used by dancers and now popularised. But in the context used, that doesn't make any sense.

[Snowflake]

I have rearrange the reception so it happened before Comrade HongHu stayed in her room.

The last post Comrade Vev has may also need to be arranged. For the last post of me says Comrade HongHu had dissapeared for 20 hours. If Comrade Vev were to do something, it would be before that 20 hours, otherwise it would be too late. Could you move it to before one of my post or jamski's post? Or, another way to do it, is to tell things in reflections. For example, instead of passing the order to dr wujiang, let him report back to comrade Vev:"Everything's been arranged." And most of the other thoughts can still be retained without major change.

[Snowflake]

Was that hush, dear Deputy Chairman? Well you were so cruel to sign my death. What I arranged for you was not that terrible was it?

[Snowflake]

Marshal, that was all that I can do for you. You have to take care of yourself from now on.

[Jamski]

Hey, you're not dead yet, Comrade. But the mindworm plan must not be stopped.

-Jam