Jailbreak Part II

[ricketyclik]

A sense of turns long ago
And war in winter
The future holds yet more turns

A complete original by ricketyclik

1000 to Keygen

[Beta]

A sense of times long ago
And peace in summer
The future much less certain.

Save to earthworm.

[CerberusIV]

Sent

[ricketyclik]

Originally posted by Andydog
hmm. the poetry started off with promise, but rapidly went down hill.

I'd be scratching to give rickety's effort a 5 out of 10.

--> Cerberus

No Andydog, it's actually very good poetry, it's just that there's a cultural disconnect. You see, I'm Australian, and you, through no fault of your own, just aren't equipped to understand the intricacies of my art, because you're from some other part of the globe. Where is it again? Hang on, I'll check...

Just checking...

I just have to check something, I'll be back in a while.

(Actually, in week, because I'm going on holidays )

[Andydog]

hmm. the poetry started off with promise, but rapidly went down hill.

I'd be scratching to give rickety's effort a 5 out of 10.

--> Cerberus

[Keygen]

Poetry epidemic!

Turn sent to Andydog

[ricketyclik]

980 to Keygen
Who certainly ain't no heathen
Just when you thought you'd beat him
You find that he's still breathin'

[Earthworm]

On to Rickety

[Beta]

960ad to EW, sans poem.

[CerberusIV]

To Beta

[ricketyclik]

960 to Keygen

[Earthworm]

keeping it moving.

[Beta]

There once was a worm called earth

Who played civ with a sense of mirth

But with little concern

The worm it did turn

And ended up in the Forth of Firth.





Save to you, EW.

[CerberusIV]

To Beta

[Andydog]

a very impressive poem Beta.

Give us more.