Planet's Warning-- Comments

[History Guy]

The story 'Planet's Warning' is just a short, 1 part thing. The reason I put it in at two posts is that it had too many words for one, and thus I had to divide it. I hope you all enjoy it. Please, if you would be so kind, post any comments or criticisms below. Thanks.

[Mr. President]

I like the story very much. It is very true to what you expect the Cult of Planet to be like. Also good is the way we are left to reflect on the main issue; Is Cha Dawn the Will of Planet, and can even a living god prevail against the industrial might of Foreman Domai?

[History Guy]

Thanks Mr. President. It's an OK story, average at most. Wrote it about a year ago. Thanks for your feedback.

[Frankychan]

Cha Dawn the Despot???

I really liked this short story seeing as how many AC players forget about the Cult of Planet.

The story had a 'Tibetan Monk' feeling and was very vivid.

But people call Yang the Despot? I think Cha Dawn is the Despot...as well as suffering from delusions of grandeur!

Good work!