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51-2: It's the worst story I ever read!!0.00%03-4: Please delete your story!0.00%05-6: I don't know...not enogh...0.00%07-8: Good story, seriously!80.00%49-10: Wonderful!!20.00%1Aslo the gods are impotent against men's stupidity --Frederich Shiller
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It's great. If you have more post it. We must have more.
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That was nice! 1) Lal being the Planet Busting Guy, 2) The way he grovels at the end.
Next time I'd like to see Morgan groveling Deirdre... or vice versa *perverse smile*Cake and grief counseling will be available at the conclusion of the test. Thank you for helping us help you help us all!Comment
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At first I didn't feel very attracted by the lack of paragraphs and by the style, but in the end they both added to the value of the story. Excellent plot even in this small story.
This is Shireroth, and Giant Squid will brutally murder me if I ever remove this link from my signature | In the end it won't be love that saves us, it will be mathematics | So many people have this concept of God the Avenger. I see God as the ultimate sense of humor -- SlowwHandComment
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I've no plan for others history of this type...Originally posted by kassiopeia
I'd like to see Morgan groveling Deirdre... or vice versa *perverse smile*
I've called this one "The Sinner" only because Lal known what he was doing... and he was not sure.
I hoped that the reader -for a while- ask to himself: who's writing? Miriam? Yang? Cha? he/she is mad? or he/she has reason?Aslo the gods are impotent against men's stupidity --Frederich Shiller
In my vocabulary the word "Impossible" doesn't exist --Napoleon
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