Comments on Assimilation

[dacole]

Well done! Love the way you descrived assimilation and the characterization of both Lal and the conciousness was spot on!

[wot]

Thank you. In a little while, I might post some fiction about Miriam. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's just a shame I couldn't have made it a little longer. Ah, well. I suppose this way it's possible that it has more of a shock impact, possibly. Thanks again!

[Bearcat]

DP

[Bearcat]

Good job. I liked how you wove in his memories and ideals, as he was being added to the Consciousness.