The Escape from Unity 2: The Return

[Slaughtergaard]

Hey guys, I came here very recently, I am Slaughter, but since theres someone else with that name was well, i chose Slaughtergaard, i mean, it's don't suit me just fine? By the way, there dome kind of neebie post or forum for sayng that you're nwe and all?

Now, i was reading the One sentence history "The Escape from Unity(http://apolyton.net/forums/showthrea...0&pagenumber=4) ", and it's was sad that it ended. So, what about a continuation: Let's begin!

Domai stepped out of the pod and Bootneck along him, and just after getting out, the two began to hear strange voices...

[Marid Audran]

...it was in fact Roze and one of her probes, speaking in a dialogue of English so burdened by neologisms, technical terms, and slang that it sounded like a couple of witches speaking in tongues.

[Slaughtergaard]

And after Santiago rolled out of the Scape pod, the pod's doors rose along with a smashed Svensgaard and a dazed Judaa Marr, that began to say "Status of body: Not godd. Svensgaard body: Hurt. Fight: Begin again" and then Svensgaard and Marr continued they dirty little fight with hits from that and other worlds...

[Marid Audran]

In the background, Roze proceeded to setup a holo-cam network that could broadcast the ensuing fight across Data Angel bandwith, "Bumfights: Chiron Concern," complete with betting options and product tie-ins.

[Illuminatus]

Re: The Escape from Unity 2: The Return

Originally posted by Slaughtergaard
Hey guys, I came here very recently, I am Slaughter, but since theres someone else with that name was well, i chose Slaughtergaard, i mean, it's don't suit me just fine? By the way, there dome kind of neebie post or forum for sayng that you're nwe and all?

Now, i was reading the One sentence history "The Escape from Unity(http://apolyton.net/forums/showthrea...0&pagenumber=4) ", and it's was sad that it ended. So, what about a continuation: Let's begin!

Domai stepped out of the pod and Bootneck along him, and just after getting out, the two began to hear strange voices...

Hi, and welcome to Apolyton Civilization Site!

Please note that SMAC(X) Fiction belongs to the AC-Fiction forum. The thread has been moved to it.

[Slaughtergaard]

Illuminatus, I put there in the general section for SMAC (X) because I think that the fic section is a little... Desert. I mean, I have only found few posts there!

Let's continue:

Then Yang began to sing "I am the great pretender" with the Drunker Zakharov along him and since Roze was trasmiting it to everyone, even to Morgan Pod, Lal said that "This thing is a truly atrocity, I mean, I am sure that these burocrats forgot to add something at the U.N Charter, i mean, one day before getting out of earth, we had a party, Zakharov brought the Vodka with him, and while you, Morgan, was trying to use your charm with EVERY woman there, even Deidre (who hate you), I was in the centre of the party, and therefore, forced to hear Zakharov and Yang get piss drunk and sing "I am the great pretender" said a mad Lal.

[Illuminatus]

Originally posted by Slaughtergaard
Illuminatus, I put there in the general section for SMAC (X) because I think that the fic section is a little... Desert. I mean, I have only found few posts there!

Traffic of a forum does not make any difference and fiction has always been a forum that is more read that posted in.

If you want to see more posts I suggest you to change the default setting in your profile from "view posts from last few 10 days" to a higher setting.