Comments on A Stepdaughter of Gaia

[Googlie]

OK, I know it's old (sheesh, it's almost 2 years since I penned the first chapter, under the name Gayle Storm)

Got 16 chapters written and posted back then, then got a new computer, and lost the game/mapfile I was working on, then lost the Gayle Storm pseudonym from Apolyton and dithered and gave up.

But, since I've started developing scenarios for gameplay, I thought "Why not recreate it, then play the game onwards?" and voila, chapters 17 and eighteen are done and the story is developing nicely.

So to refresh your memories - and for the new readers who weren't perusing the Boards back in summer 1999 - here over the next few days are the first chapters.

Comments, as always, welcome.

Googlie

[Clear Skies]

I love it. I think it's absolutely fantastic, and I wish I could write that well.
I look forward to the next chapter!

[Googlie]

Thanks for the kind words, SMAC Fanatic.

In rsponse, I've put another couple of chapters in the thread



G.

[Argonaut]

Good stuff as always Googlie. Keep it coming

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Argo
"People want to believe what they see is true, even if it's only for the time they are in the playhouse. That's what theatre is, don't you understand? Showing people what they wish were true."
-Robertson Davies "World of Wonders"

[Jasonian]

Hey! I remember this one! Great work Googlie.

[Alynzia]

Alynzia on your story: !

[mark13]

Just wandered over here for the first time the other day, and had a look at it - absolutely riveting stuff Googlie, keep up the good work!