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  • #16
    I hardly think this is "I never stopped reading":

    LightEning 17.1.200 17:54 I wonder, do you still remember that you are the
    governor of Free Drone Central?

    Jasonian 17.1.200 21:39 ...Free Drone Central?

    Crossfire Tales?

    LightEning 17.1.200 22:07 Close, but no cigar. The Wizard of Chiron.

    http://apolyton.net/forums/Forum14/HTML/000270.ht
    l?35

    Jasonian 17.1.200 22:08 Wizard of Chiron! I remember that.
    But... I was never in that...

    LightEning 17.1.200 22:08 Well, check it for your name. You promised him
    that he could use your name a few months ago
    IIRC.

    Jasonian 17.1.200 22:09 Hmm... I don't recal that, but it does sound like
    something I would have done.

    LightEning 17.1.200 22:12 "No shame in that. It adds more fun to the story
    if you use other names.
    Jasonian is a drone at heart. We would make a
    good supervisor, in either the Free Drones
    faction or the drone population of another
    faction."

    http://apolyton.net/forums/Forum14/HTML/000182.ht
    l

    Jasonian 17.1.200 22:12 That sure sounds familiar.
    This is Shireroth, and Giant Squid will brutally murder me if I ever remove this link from my signature | In the end it won't be love that saves us, it will be mathematics | So many people have this concept of God the Avenger. I see God as the ultimate sense of humor -- SlowwHand

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    • #17
      Hey! It's not my fault he stopped writing so long ago that I forgot which story the Wizard of Chiron was!

      Oh yes... he'll make a good villan.
      Banned on Black Saturday in the name of those who went before him.

      Realizes that no one probably remembers that event.

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      • #18
        You can use my username in the story... I thought you already had- but perhaps I'm confusing this with Alnistera's story???
        -->Visit CGN!
        -->"Production! More Production! Production creates Wealth! Production creates more Jobs!"-Wendell Willkie -1944

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        • #19
          Well, in any case I am glad to see that you're still enjoying the Wizard of Chiron.

          Why will Sprayber be a good villain? I'm interested in hearing this.

          EDIT:
          BTW, enjoy chapter 46.
          [This message has been edited by Raging Mouse (edited January 21, 2001).]

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          • #20
            You must be; I haven't used your username.. yet. Thanx!

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            • #21
              Ah... nothing like a good Monty Python reference to start the day.

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              • #22

                Mouse:

                What an incredible story! I've just recently stumbled on the Apolyton boards, and really enjoyed reading what you've posted thus far (gobbled it all up at once... I reckon that's what I get for being so greedy). Keep 'em comin'! Please!

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                • #23
                  There's plenty more to come.. especially now, that I've decided to cast some light on additional factions. You'll see

                  Anyways, thought I'd post two chapters today, since chapter 48 is too short (I think). Happy reading!

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                  • #24
                    I feel I should tell you, that chapter 52 is one of my personal favourites. That might explain why it's one of the longest ones, as well, but it's no excuse. I hope you enjoy it, as I definitely enjoyed writing it.

                    [Insert insane laughter according to personal taste]

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                    • #25
                      Very, very good... but I think you used the wrong name for Hubris at one point. (Or maybe it was the right name, but you didn't intend to reveal that yet??)

                      It's the paragraph that starts out, "The noise from the masses of cultists increases yet more, into a throbbing physical force."

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                      • #26
                        Thanks, Gregurabi, hadn't noticed that. That's what I get for doing five tasks at once, three of which involve writing. Feel free to point out any other mishaps.

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                        • #27
                          WoW! That last chapter was really good. You described the scene really well. I was beginning to think the cult were a bunch of pushovers. The Hive doesn't look half bad compared to those guys. Keep the chapters comming.
                          Which side are we on? We're on the side of the demons, Chief. We are evil men in the gardens of paradise, sent by the forces of death to spread devastation and destruction wherever we go. I'm surprised you didn't know that. --Saul Tigh

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                          • #28
                            Raging Mouse:

                            Enjoyed the last few chapters. It looks like your setting some good action up. So I'll just keep reading and waiting for my character to pop up somewhere.
                            Which side are we on? We're on the side of the demons, Chief. We are evil men in the gardens of paradise, sent by the forces of death to spread devastation and destruction wherever we go. I'm surprised you didn't know that. --Saul Tigh

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                            • #29
                              Must... have... more... WizardofChiron....

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                              • #30
                                Well, i have finally got around to start reading Wizard of Chiron last week...and throughout the week when i have time. I finish reading the chapters that are up. I like the story a lot )

                                is Hudris a empath clone of Dorothy? I like the Seven Seas Jimmy. He sure was around for quite awhile, and lucky/good at not getting himself killed too.

                                More Wizard of Chiron please, if possible

                                wish i was a good writer me have so many ideas, but suck at applying it in writing, since i suck in writing. always have sentence structure problems, spelling sometimes and trouble making things sound interesting or properly describe something. I rather draw to explain what i see. Visual person i am... and i like reading too.

                                LMP is available
                                aslong i am not some evil dude.
                                me good person, not evil
                                me the impossible

                                -LordLMP

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