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  • Well, hello again.

    Time to start anew. I've read through the first book of my little story, changed the order of some chapters, added some details.. and then I studied the first five chapters in detail, changing some wording and stuff like that. Here they are.

    Oh, BTW. I'm up at chapter 64 at the moment. I took the pains to make one big file out of the entire story, pasting the chapters one by one into another document. Then I asked for some stats.. I've written over 90,000 words so far in this story! And there's more on the way [pauses for some insane, manic laughter]

    I apologize beforehand for the heavy task of reading it all.. I hope you will enjoy it.
    [This message has been edited by Raging Mouse (edited January 08, 2001).]

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    So you did NOT get tired with storywriting, I see .

    There's always a place for you in the OT .
    This is Shireroth, and Giant Squid will brutally murder me if I ever remove this link from my signature | In the end it won't be love that saves us, it will be mathematics | So many people have this concept of God the Avenger. I see God as the ultimate sense of humor -- SlowwHand

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    • #3
      Hey. I liked your story. Looking forward to more. I went back to the first ones and liked what I read.

      Yeah come join us in the OT. You might find some inspiration for different characters there.
      Which side are we on? We're on the side of the demons, Chief. We are evil men in the gardens of paradise, sent by the forces of death to spread devastation and destruction wherever we go. I'm surprised you didn't know that. --Saul Tigh

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      • #4
        I'm glad to see there's still some interest in my story. Sprayber, I've modified the story somewhat, so you might enjoy reading the first book as well.. though I haven't changed that much.. just the sequence of some events. Anyways, I'll post at a quite fast pace to reach where I left the story dangling, so maybe sometime next week we'll get to the new parts.

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        • #5
          RM,

          I'm glad you've reactivated Wizard of Chiron. You're just chuck full of good ideas, and you are able to weave them into a terrific story!

          Welcome back!

          Hydro

          P.S. - there is no need to apologize when you are doing US a favor by posting!

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          • #6
            Yay! This is one of my favorites. I'm glad it will be continued.

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            • #7
              That's part fifteen posted. Not much has changed in parts eleven through fifteen, but then I can't remember everything I've done either. BTW, I suspect this story will be more than a hundred chapters long.

              You have been warned. :P

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              • #8
                Chapter 45 is the first of the chapters I haven't posted yet. So, I will post five chapters per day, up to and including friday. That way, chapter 46 will be posted sometime next week.

                Happy reading!

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                • #9
                  Well, I could use a couple of names for some members of a probe-team, and I'm out of ideas.. any readers still willing to contribute their nickname to the story? ..Or any I have cruelly (but unintentionally)forgotten? :/

                  The first piece of the story is soon completely re-posted; Chapter 39 will begin what I call Book Two. It will be posted about a day from now.

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                  • #10
                    You can use mine. I wouldn't mind being a bad guy. Even if that ment being killed horribly. Remember that it is Sprayber pronounced Spray.bur
                    Which side are we on? We're on the side of the demons, Chief. We are evil men in the gardens of paradise, sent by the forces of death to spread devastation and destruction wherever we go. I'm surprised you didn't know that. --Saul Tigh

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                    • #11
                      quote:

                      Originally posted by Raging Mouse on 01-17-2001 05:45 AM
                      Well, I could use a couple of names for some members of a probe-team, and I'm out of ideas.. any readers still willing to contribute their nickname to the story? ..Or any I have cruelly (but unintentionally)forgotten? :/

                      The first piece of the story is soon completely re-posted; Chapter 39 will begin what I call Book Two. It will be posted about a day from now.


                      Yeah, you can do whatever you want with my name. I encourage you to use my name. Please use my name. I beg you to use my name. I pray you to use my name!
                      This is Shireroth, and Giant Squid will brutally murder me if I ever remove this link from my signature | In the end it won't be love that saves us, it will be mathematics | So many people have this concept of God the Avenger. I see God as the ultimate sense of humor -- SlowwHand

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                      • #12
                        Oh, goody! I didn't have to advertise for the part of a villain!

                        Of course, the only absolute villain in the story is Beta... everyone else has an excuse. He has already died quite horribly once, so I wouldn't want to overdo the gory part..

                        Anyways. Thank you both.. LightEning, be seeing your nickname beginning from chapter 66.. Sprayber, you might have to wait just a tad longer than that.. I'll try and make it worthwile.

                        Now, on with the story! Tonight we close Book One, and continue with Book Two.. And tomorrow I'll post the first new chapter. Stay tuned!

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                        • #13
                          Yay! It's about time this story got moving again!
                          Banned on Black Saturday in the name of those who went before him.

                          Realizes that no one probably remembers that event.

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                          • #14
                            Nice to have you back reading, Jasonian.

                            That's *huff* chapter 45 *huff* posted. *Wheeeezeeee...* I'll take it easier from now on, maybe posting a new chapter every other day, for as long as I've got chapters. Hang on, 'cause it'll get really interesting now!

                            Now Read On....

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                            • #15
                              Back reading? I never stopped reading. I just stopped posting. I remember all of this (well... most of it anyway)
                              Banned on Black Saturday in the name of those who went before him.

                              Realizes that no one probably remembers that event.

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