I can only hope this turns out better than the last one I wrote
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The Ordinary People
“Hey, hey HEY!!! Wake up man!!!” I heard this voice ringing in my ears as I woke up from the cryocell.
“We need to head to the colony pods in about 5 hours, so lemmie tell ya about the factions that formed a while back.” He said to me when I got dried off.
I listened as he told me about the eleven factions that formed during the near-total chaos the was raging on the ship after everyone woke up, the Peacekeepers sounded pretty promising, but after hearing about the Data Angels, the Peacekeepers sounded just a little too wimpy. The Consciousness sounded like the Hive, only with no personality and Facisim, The materialistic Ideals of the Morganites was too much, but I’d have to admit tempting, the Believers were simply weird, the eco-daftness of the Gaians was just a little hippieish besides the fact that lady Deidre was very cute, I wouldn't want to end up as a lab rat so the University was right out, I simply can’t live the military life with the Spartans, buccanering Pirates was just too rustic for my taste and a workingman’s paradise as a Free Drone sounded too god to be true which it would problably turn out to be so I was to become a Data Angel.
As I was walking down the hallway with my friend George to the colony landing module with a probe team and a scout patrol, we heard an explosion.
"Quick we need to get to the colony pods now!!!" I heard George yelling so we ran towards the entrance where a woman was standing, I think that was Sinder Roze but the explosion knocked out the lights.
And suddenly, we were hit with a massive crowd but we just kept running, unfortunately we were turned around and ended up leading the crowd in the wrong direction and led the colonists in the wrong direction into the damned cargo bay!!! The doors closed behind us and red lights and sirens started blaring.
"Warning warning, cargo bay separation in five minutes" We heard a monotone voice saying over a microphone.
"Hey! Wait a minute! This isn't the Peacekeepers colony pod!" I heard a man yell and he was right, this wasn't even a colony pod at all, but the main cargo bay that held all the pressure suits, building materials, energy credit stores, supplies, weapons, and all the terraforming equipment that the Gaians didn't take with them, this was better than a colony pod. But the people didn't realize that, they were interested in getting the hell outta there.
"We gotta get out we'll all die!!!" One man screamed and soon the whole crowd started screaming.
After about five minutes, we all got a sensation of falling, that was because we were falling into Chiron's atmosphere! Soon after the floor started feeling warm, we all climbed on top of boxes that were already rising off the floor because of the fall. The floor tuned red with the immense heat and we had sufficient protection by the heat by our "floating" boxes. The only sounds we could hear were of the roaring thunder of our decent through the stratosphere.
Then we hit the ground.............HARD.
But it wasn't the kind of impact that would kill us, instead we heard the loudest boom and believe it or not splat we ever heard it was as if we landed on a gigantic bug.
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The Ordinary People
“Hey, hey HEY!!! Wake up man!!!” I heard this voice ringing in my ears as I woke up from the cryocell.
“We need to head to the colony pods in about 5 hours, so lemmie tell ya about the factions that formed a while back.” He said to me when I got dried off.
I listened as he told me about the eleven factions that formed during the near-total chaos the was raging on the ship after everyone woke up, the Peacekeepers sounded pretty promising, but after hearing about the Data Angels, the Peacekeepers sounded just a little too wimpy. The Consciousness sounded like the Hive, only with no personality and Facisim, The materialistic Ideals of the Morganites was too much, but I’d have to admit tempting, the Believers were simply weird, the eco-daftness of the Gaians was just a little hippieish besides the fact that lady Deidre was very cute, I wouldn't want to end up as a lab rat so the University was right out, I simply can’t live the military life with the Spartans, buccanering Pirates was just too rustic for my taste and a workingman’s paradise as a Free Drone sounded too god to be true which it would problably turn out to be so I was to become a Data Angel.
As I was walking down the hallway with my friend George to the colony landing module with a probe team and a scout patrol, we heard an explosion.
"Quick we need to get to the colony pods now!!!" I heard George yelling so we ran towards the entrance where a woman was standing, I think that was Sinder Roze but the explosion knocked out the lights.
And suddenly, we were hit with a massive crowd but we just kept running, unfortunately we were turned around and ended up leading the crowd in the wrong direction and led the colonists in the wrong direction into the damned cargo bay!!! The doors closed behind us and red lights and sirens started blaring.
"Warning warning, cargo bay separation in five minutes" We heard a monotone voice saying over a microphone.
"Hey! Wait a minute! This isn't the Peacekeepers colony pod!" I heard a man yell and he was right, this wasn't even a colony pod at all, but the main cargo bay that held all the pressure suits, building materials, energy credit stores, supplies, weapons, and all the terraforming equipment that the Gaians didn't take with them, this was better than a colony pod. But the people didn't realize that, they were interested in getting the hell outta there.
"We gotta get out we'll all die!!!" One man screamed and soon the whole crowd started screaming.
After about five minutes, we all got a sensation of falling, that was because we were falling into Chiron's atmosphere! Soon after the floor started feeling warm, we all climbed on top of boxes that were already rising off the floor because of the fall. The floor tuned red with the immense heat and we had sufficient protection by the heat by our "floating" boxes. The only sounds we could hear were of the roaring thunder of our decent through the stratosphere.
Then we hit the ground.............HARD.
But it wasn't the kind of impact that would kill us, instead we heard the loudest boom and believe it or not splat we ever heard it was as if we landed on a gigantic bug.
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