Comments "The Battle for Sparta Command"

[LightSniper]

Wow.... thats all i got to say. The last part of the story seemed straight out of shakespeare or a greak philospher...

although it was short and not that filled with information (not saying that was bad though) i can't wait for the next part.

Simply put... Great job

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Life is Awesome

[Evil Knevil]

thanks...
any comments on the mutiny(2nd part)section?
Too rambling imho.

[Evil Knevil]

I'm sorry the story hasn't been updated in ages, its just that... nevermind. Personal reasons have stopped me from being able to write a single word. However I'm back in steam now, so expect a few more installments

ciao.

[Evil Knevil]

[senatus]

It's dark, nihlistic... and some of the best writing here I've seen. Please continue, although I may need "hits" of the Forgotten Faction to get over the depressing parts