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    It was wierd that no none had replied the earlier "Comments" post that I place some time ago so tell me what you think. I know that my chapter are running a little short.

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    And I asked him,
    What is thy name?
    And he replied saying:
    My Name is iMac: for we
    are many..
    And I asked him,
    What is thy name?
    And he replied saying:
    My Name is iMac: for we
    are many..

  • #2
    Not a bad story. The first chapters were maybe a bit boring, but when the purpose of the satellite is revealed... * Giggles again *
    This is Shireroth, and Giant Squid will brutally murder me if I ever remove this link from my signature | In the end it won't be love that saves us, it will be mathematics | So many people have this concept of God the Avenger. I see God as the ultimate sense of humor -- SlowwHand

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    • #3
      I will also put here the Ordinary faction symbol I think you'll be pleasantly suprised.

      there it is, that simile

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      And I asked him,
      What is thy name?
      And he replied saying:
      My Name is iMac: for we
      are many..
      And I asked him,
      What is thy name?
      And he replied saying:
      My Name is iMac: for we
      are many..

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      • #4
        Hmmmmmm its weird that noone is replying to this topic.

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        And I asked him,
        What is thy name?
        And he replied saying:
        My Name is iMac: for we
        are many..
        And I asked him,
        What is thy name?
        And he replied saying:
        My Name is iMac: for we
        are many..

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        • #5
          Hmmmmmm its weird that noone is replying to this topic.

          ------------------
          And I asked him,
          What is thy name?
          And he replied saying:
          My Name is iMac: for we
          are many..
          And I asked him,
          What is thy name?
          And he replied saying:
          My Name is iMac: for we
          are many..

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          • #6
            Well, this topic has more replies than the "Books of Centauri comments" thread, so all I have to do is to be envious. Well, maybe I just have to write some more stories. I suffer from CLOTS(Chronic Lack Of Time Syndrome), but that's no excuse. Or maybe it is.
            This is Shireroth, and Giant Squid will brutally murder me if I ever remove this link from my signature | In the end it won't be love that saves us, it will be mathematics | So many people have this concept of God the Avenger. I see God as the ultimate sense of humor -- SlowwHand

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