Comments about the "Crossfire Tales"

[DinoDoc]

Cotroneo and Jasonian, I would just like to say "Wow!". I really enjoyed reading the stories but, I just have one minor critique. Jasonian, you say that your story takes place ten years before Cotroneo's and yet he seems to say that it is taking place contemporaneously to his. It seems that a minor edit is in order.

[Jasonian]

DinoDoc,

Thanks for the comment! It's nice to know that someone is reading and likes our work! Cotroneo and I are having some fun setting up the background of this epic, so expect many more episodes.

In my defence, I believe that Cotroneo wrote his openers, then I split my first part. Part 1 was ten years before and explained Domai's background. In between there should be some *** and a "Present Day" comment, which should show that part 2 is back up to the time with the other stories, so everything works out.

Just half of my first part is set in the past. Perhaps I should have made that more clear.

Also DinoDoc, we're looking for some more writers for this. Just pick any faction, old or new, besides Drones, Angels, Peacekeepers, or the two aliens. Tell us your pick and a background and we will send you what you need to know.


- Jasonian (back to the drone mines)

[Cotroneo]

much appreciated man, like jason said, its nice to know someone cares about raptor....ehheheh

yes jason was write about the ten year thing.....it was small to catch, so i totally understand where your coming from. anyway jason always knows what he is doing, hes a "civer" and im a junior...lol

we have been working out the secret projects and such and almost have the map ready to go.

any ideas on how the story should evolve?

[DinoDoc]

Thanks for the invite Jasonian but, sadly, my strengths lie more in the area of the editor and not the writer.

[Raging Mouse]

The story thread is getting slightly big, and takes a while to download.. What to do? Shall we put a max number of posts after which we switch?

[Cotroneo]

should we do 50 ....then start crossfire tales part 2?

[Googlie]

After 50 posts Apolyton automatically starts you on page 2 (see the original Chronicles thread - we let it get to 7 Apolyton pages (350 posts) before it bogged down)

Googlie

[Cotroneo]

well it took me like 10000 minutes to load the orginall 350 pages. I would hope that doesn't occur if we ever get that big. perhaps we just make a new thread we get about half of that. I don't want any readers being mad...

[Jasonian]

Wow Cotroneo! That's almost 7 days!! Your computer must be REALLY slow

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- Jasonian (back to the Drone mines)

[Cotroneo]

Boy, everyone is a comic these days...

[dante^]

Hi all. Cotroneo and Jasonian, if you could send me the background info and maybe a map I will start to write an introductory chapter for the Nautilus Pirates. Nothing fancy, just a short intro before I go into "exam mode".

Aston

[Cotroneo]

Will do....sorry i couldn't get back to you sooner, ive been very busy, i barely got a chance to finish another section of the tales....the pirate faction should be interesting.....i'll send you the information when i get a chance, probably tommorrow night, sorry im in a hurry....looking foward. If you need to contact me my email is paulcotroneo@cs.com

[dante^]

Hi everyone,

Hope you like my posts in the "Crossfire Tales". I know it's only two rather short posts, but I've been real busy. I'm really looking for feedback because this is the first time I've written anything for anyone else besides for my English class.

Aston

[Cotroneo]

dante...are you my long lost brother or something......this forum thing was the first time i wrote anything outside of english class...... by any chance were you born in anchorage alaska?

[dante^]

Heh afraid not...I better go ask my parents in case they're hiding something from me LOL