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My good buddy yiff_yiff_yaoi wrote this story and was looking for some constructive criticism. Hope you enjoy it! For those unfamiliar with the characters, I suggest you play the masterpiece that is FF VIII (FF XXI in Japan).
Fobiden roMANce
"Noooooooooooooooooo!!!" Squall yelled as he bolted upright in bed, sweat pouring down his furrowed brow.
"Whats the matter Squall, did you have another bad dream?" Seifer said comfortingly as he curled up next to Squall's quivering sillohuete. "Was it the same dream honey?"
"Yes it was the same dream, its always the same dream!" said Squall, his anger rising within him like bubbles through a fine chardone.
Seifer's fingers began to dance lovingly over Squall's chest.
"Squall, sweety, there is no reason to get angry with me. I'm the good guy here, remember?"
"Well then that must make me the bad guy then." Squall said as he pushed Seifer back down on the bed and rolled on top of him. Seifer let out a low moan and gasp of approval as he felt Squall's naked body come into contact with his own.
Squall and Seifer embraced and began kissing eachother passionately. Their broad hairless chests heaving together in the moonlight. Squall curled his arms underneath Seifer and began to caress his arched back and shoulderblades.
"We both know where this is going, don't we," said Seifer alluringly as he began to wiggle his way out from Squall's powerful arms...
(note from author: 'tee hee hee, time for little boys and girls to go to bed, this next part is for adults only )
Squall winked knowingly at Seifer and reached over to the nightstand to grab the anal lubricant. He began to lube up.
"Squall, sweety, we discussed this before..." Seifer turned his head around and said.
Squall sighed and reached back into the night stand and pulled out a condom.
Seifer took the condom from Squall's hand and placed it in the corner of his mouth.
"Tee hee hee, since you're being such a good sport, I'll even put it on for you. " Seifer said as he rolled over and slid beneath Squall's waiste.
Well, thats as far as I could get before I came all over my keyboard, what do you guys think?
Fobiden roMANce
"Noooooooooooooooooo!!!" Squall yelled as he bolted upright in bed, sweat pouring down his furrowed brow.
"Whats the matter Squall, did you have another bad dream?" Seifer said comfortingly as he curled up next to Squall's quivering sillohuete. "Was it the same dream honey?"
"Yes it was the same dream, its always the same dream!" said Squall, his anger rising within him like bubbles through a fine chardone.
Seifer's fingers began to dance lovingly over Squall's chest.
"Squall, sweety, there is no reason to get angry with me. I'm the good guy here, remember?"
"Well then that must make me the bad guy then." Squall said as he pushed Seifer back down on the bed and rolled on top of him. Seifer let out a low moan and gasp of approval as he felt Squall's naked body come into contact with his own.
Squall and Seifer embraced and began kissing eachother passionately. Their broad hairless chests heaving together in the moonlight. Squall curled his arms underneath Seifer and began to caress his arched back and shoulderblades.
"We both know where this is going, don't we," said Seifer alluringly as he began to wiggle his way out from Squall's powerful arms...
(note from author: 'tee hee hee, time for little boys and girls to go to bed, this next part is for adults only )
Squall winked knowingly at Seifer and reached over to the nightstand to grab the anal lubricant. He began to lube up.
"Squall, sweety, we discussed this before..." Seifer turned his head around and said.
Squall sighed and reached back into the night stand and pulled out a condom.
Seifer took the condom from Squall's hand and placed it in the corner of his mouth.
"Tee hee hee, since you're being such a good sport, I'll even put it on for you. " Seifer said as he rolled over and slid beneath Squall's waiste.
Well, thats as far as I could get before I came all over my keyboard, what do you guys think?
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