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  • #31
    Thanks guys
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    • #32
      Excellent story very good reading, just one question isnt Calvary where Christ was crusified i will have to check the spelling again just popped into my head but keep up the good work very good stuff!!!

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      • #33
        Originally posted by Psycho1
        ... just one question isnt Calvary where Christ was crusified[?] ...
        I do believe that the hill just outside Jerusalem named Calvary (better known, of course, as Golgotha - the hebrew name) is considered to be the place where Jesus was crucified.
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        • #34
          I believe you are correct so the spelling he is looking for is cavalry no biggie i got the picture still a great story

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          • #35
            Hey Psycho1 I make these selling mistakes to order and if you want some Im sure we can arrange a trade.
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            • #36
              Originally posted by vovansim
              I also definitely see great improvement in style over the previous story of yours, which could only be bad.

              Hoping you don't bother with the next installment.
              Vova, whaddya mean "great improvements of his previous story"? You mean his previous story was really bad or something? That's not very nice. I think Mike's story was a real wing-dinger.
              Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.

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              • #37
                Having fun changing over the words again, scratchy?

                No, I don't mean that the previous story was bad. The story was good, and the fact that it won a contest only supports that claim. Now, since the style of this one, in my opinion, is much better, means, inherently, that this story is so much better than the previous one...
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                • #38
                  No disrespect i cant spell either haha!! but i do love your story hope to write one soon myself!!

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                  • #39
                    I must say, I'm beginning to like this story more than Mike's story. Its great! Keep this train movin, bro.

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                    • #40
                      Sorry to not have any more for you folks, Easthaven asked me why I was on the second page when I nagged him earlier.

                      Unfortunately things have not improved and I only have enough time to check the stories at the moment. Im hoping to get back to writing as soon as possible, so please be patient thanks.
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                      • #41
                        I am pleased to announce that I have now started to write the next part of this story, thanks for your patience .

                        I will work on it over the next few days and post early next week or maybe sooner if time permits, but in the meantime heres a bump for those who are new and may not have seen this yet and for the rest of you to recap, thanks again for bearing with me.
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                        • #42
                          Yay!

                          Looking forward to the next part, Chris.
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                          • #43
                            Praise the LORD!

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                            • #44
                              Originally posted by Easthaven I
                              Praise the LORD!
                              guitarist! This is not SKI's story.

                              Praise the... ehm... general of all legions of Rome!
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                              • #45
                                Since you have shown great wisdom and respect for protocol my friend vovansim, I can assure you that if their should ever be just cause for the empire to dispose of your good self, then I Chrisius Maximus general of all the legions of Rome, he who doth have the ear of the emporer(and thankfully not his nose) shall ensure that ye shall never suffer the fate of the crucifixtion. No my friend it shall be quick and painles for one so true as you and the lions havent been fed for some time.

                                Just kidding,
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