Manifest Destiny

[vovan]

Don't tell us you have algebra to do, either.

[SKILORD]

I got home just last night, it's ok,I have no block and will likely get another chapter out today. i got home too exhausted to write anything, 2 cups of cofee this morning kept me barely awake until now (Even with some sleep last night I'm still a little tired)

No block, though i do have College Algebra homework to do...

[vovan]

Originally posted by SKILORD
No block, though i do have College Algebra homework to do...

* Vovansim slaps himself on the forehead *

Am I the only masochist here, taking Discrete Math and Multivariable Claculus at the same time this semester?

[Centauri18]

Algebra... yuck. I hated algebra. And that was the high school version, I shudder to think what College Algebra is like.
I loathe math. I would rather get my teeth drilled without anasthetic then have to do another semester of Algebra.

[SKILORD]

Am I the only masochist here, taking Discrete Math and Multivariable Claculus at the same time this semester?

That gopes beyond masochism.

My dad stole my keyboard, but i might get a chapter out tonight

[vovan]

Originally posted by SKILORD
My dad stole my keyboard, but i might get a chapter out tonight

Does he not want you to write any more stories?

PS: Wait a minnit, how are posting that message, if your keyboard has been stolen?

[gooberboob]

Probably cut and paste...

[vovan]

Originally posted by gooberboob
Probably cut and paste...

That might be it. But that would take a long time. And you have to be reeeealy devoted to write a chapter that way. If SKILORD did it, I would vote for the story in the contest just for that.

[SKILORD]

No i went to his computer actually.

He felt that i stole the keyboard from him, and his other one was broken and he felt justified it's a long story.

Cut and paste is an interesting idea.....

[SKILORD]

Finally. i have the time, and the patience, to write the next chapter.

[SKILORD]

grrrr.... no i don't.....

[SKILORD]

Chapter 15: Some other stuff happens

The team of ducks waved their wings imposingly.

"Quack"

Fluffy wasn't frightened, who could be scared of ducks, even if there were twenty of them. Bob the Cat growled besides him,

"I've never seen ducks in the Rocky Mountains before..."

"Yeah and horses aren't indigenous to America, but appear on the map."

"Good point, i'm sure, whatever you mean."

It was a good point, thought Fluffy.

A duck waddled close to them, bent it's head so it could look Fluffy in the eye, something like a snort escaped it's bill.

"Quack!!!!!"

Suddenly all the ducks leapt, feathers were everywhere as the ducks discovered that as feirce as they thought they may be, they had no claws or anything remotely imposing, they were summarilly slaughtered by the cats.

"What was the poin there?" Bob asked Fluffy, even while feathers still littered the air.

"I don't know, i guess the audience wanted more cat...."

A weak quack came from a larger pile of feathers, Fluffy sulked over to investigate.

-

Sam grinned at them, he could hardly be recognised asa beard now clung to his face.

"How have you been Pedro? It's been a while, i remember knowig you back when a man's property was his alone, not subject to the whims of government."

"You know, you're going to be a father soon, the good people of Boston are quite upset with you."

Sam shrugged, "They'll get over it."

Pedro slapped him backhanded.

"You and i both know you're a better man than that, I bought you a small shop there, I promised to retreive you for them. You have a child to rear."

Sam spat on the ground as he felt along for his razor, to shave before his journey.

"Sure as hell better be a boy." He grumbled, knowing that a son could continue the story in the sequel, knowing that his was finally done.

Outside, Will nursed his casted arm. watching the building that Pedro had entered. A scream began in the sky, he looked around, suddenly a cat fell from the sky.

"Damn Ducks.... can't tell South from East."

Will watched as the feline pulled itself up and looked at him.

"I'm your cat now, I don't know why i was put in the story, but i'm sure of that. We're going to open up a shop, i'll show you how."

"Uhhh.... i guess so."

Humans are so stupid, thought the cat.

Cat's are so bossy thought Will.

-

General Lee had been replaced, President Stonewall Jackson now held the chair of powert in the South.

"Ah Assure you, my fellows, the South shall indeed Rahise again. That's what the Sequel will be for."

The other men grumbled, disbeleiving.

"The South Shall Raihse AGAIN!"

[SKILORD]

yes.... i do

[ChrisiusMaximus]

SKILORD I have seconded this as I thoroughly enjoyed it up untill the point that fluffy entered the plot. I dont mind you writing what you like and I still enjoyed reading it after fluffy appeared but I think there are really two stories here.

I might be wrong here but I suspect you might have got bored with writing this ? hence the change of direction ?

SKILORD this was a good story but not your best, I only really know your recent work so I cant really judge for sure but I liked Frostbite A Vikings Tale the best so far.

One thing I do know is that you are a very talented writer and I will surely be reading many more great stories by your good self.

I sincerely hope I have not offended you in any way and look forward to the sequel herein mentioned.

[SKILORD]

I might be wrong here but I suspect you might have got bored with writing this ? hence the change of direction ?

A trend noticed in my other stories is their brevity, from my first story (Rome: Glory and Disgrace) to my recent Frostbite and Land of the Brave.

The long story was poorly timed, i was really excited with it, but as i started becoming really busy it's fascinating nature paled. Sorry i couldn't keep it up all the way, judging from the feedback i got as it progressed you weren't alone in your opinions Chrisus.