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Tahank you, i spent all of last night working on that chapter, i left out a scene where Howard Johnson's body was found and further speculation was done on the nature of death, i kind of miss it, but it may have been for the better.
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Its my pleasure Ski as I said that chapter was great, I would be obliged if you would post your thoughts of my story Mikes Story on my thread.
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Quite impressive, skilord. You are very productive, I must say. Six chapters in three days? That must be tough. And the quality of writing for such speed is pretty good also. Keep going, and never mind the lack of feedback here. You know we are reading and enjoying the writing
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Chapter 7: An Uncertain Fate
They were to leave London, that was for sure. The Aztecs had finally capitulated so that front was forever silenced, The burning remains of their warriors would take a long enough time to remove to deter any nation from war for a while. The West had another tool to maintain peace as well.
Salamnaca was the capitail of a small, yet powerful nation. In the end Germany had capttured a few towns to the south, the Cowboys had captured Grand River. But an Army was brewing. The final tank force was being assembled to take back it all. Hiawatha stood before them, making his bold demands of conquest. They were his last demands, Though he survived the blast that vaporised his tanks Hiawatha begged for peace on the allies terms. Everything he had was taken, his nation was left barren, with no hope of ressurection.
And America and the West began to eye each other as enemies do. A Cold War set in, a pregnant stalemate. But that is another story.
I felt that this would best end it. Look for my upcoming Celtic Story, Home of the Brave.Read Blessed be the Peacemakers | Read Political Freedom | Read Pax Germania: A Story of Redemption | Read Unrelated Matters | Read Stains of Blood and Ash | Read Ripper: A Glimpse into the Life of Gen. Jack Sterling | Read Deutschland Erwachte! | Read The Best Friend | Read A Mothers Day Poem | Read Deliver us From Evil | Read The Promised LandComment
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Bravo
and I'll will keep my eye open for your Celtic extravaganza!
A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was.Comment
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The Celtic story will have to wait about a week, i'm gonna be away. I tried to start it just now but i haven't any insparation at the moment.Read Blessed be the Peacemakers | Read Political Freedom | Read Pax Germania: A Story of Redemption | Read Unrelated Matters | Read Stains of Blood and Ash | Read Ripper: A Glimpse into the Life of Gen. Jack Sterling | Read Deutschland Erwachte! | Read The Best Friend | Read A Mothers Day Poem | Read Deliver us From Evil | Read The Promised LandComment
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Yes, nice quick one, Skilord. Will be reading your next story as soon as it is up. Good job on this one, and keep it up, and keep the goods coming, as soon as you get over the "writer's block" of yours.
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Good story, had a nice twist on things but kept that Civ3 theme. Too bad Bert won the duel though, heh."Every good communist should know political power grows out of the barrel of a gun." - Mao tse-TungComment
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